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Comic Chapter 4 Sketch (13,14)
🕑 Added 2019-09-19 14:37:53 +0000 UTCpage 13 and 14 and starting with the top vote on the poll, hogtie!
Jenn had a frogtie so just adjust it a bit into a frog hogtie.
Frey seemed a bit spoiled I might have to rethink it a bit to fit more her character more like the past comics, where she's a bit more docile. Or just add the other girls to seem like everybody cant wait for their turn.
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Comments
Nice to see Jenn's knotted cleave gag get covered up with an OTM gag; I guess one strip of cloth wasn't enough to muffle her properly for the kidnapping simulation. And is she trying to roll around on page 2, before Eric grabs her crosstie to hold her in place? Great way of suggesting her athletic attitrude through visuals, nice! What about Frey in this chapter (or these pages) makes her seem spoiled you? I'm down to see her be more emphatic as a captive wanting attention from Eric, but of course that final decision is up to you. Of course involving Shore and Mich as well would make for more humor too... Maybe Frey would be somewhat docile at first, only to grunt and moan through her gag with greater and greater emphasis as Eric specifically focuses on restraining the other girls first (and after their embrace on the previous two pages, no less!) Great job so far, I look forward to seeing how your color and shading brings these panels all the more to life. And might I say, the fourth panel on the second page...goddamn gorgeous, solid gags+sweet expressions for the absolute win!
Aurum
Maybe a crotch rope for fun?
coredumperror
I do love a good hogtie!
