Briaeros
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🕑 Added 2023-07-19 21:03:40 +0000 UTCHere's page 054 and an attached zip file with the original clean images including three unused ones.
Some times it takes a lot of trying to get the camera angle and the poses right. Often the image looks good but once it's placed on the page it doesn't work.
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Briaeros
Thank you! That was the picture that took me the longest to get right. The posing and the camera angle were difficult enough. But on top of that it had to "read" right as, because she's turning 180º, she's facing the camera in the same angle as the previous image but it's a reverse shot.
Briaeros
The only thing even worse thant that would be to say "what else may go wrong?".
Joe Bananas
Now she’s gone and done it, she reassured the hostage the bad guy will never bother her again…
claybear
I notice that the guiding our eye usually guides the action scenes. On the upper right panel, we're introduced to the action through the dialogue bubble (a prelude to the action). The eye is guided to the mid-action through the kick and then concludes with the enemy feeling the kick. The action of a panel usually involves a prelude, a mid, and conclusion like what we see here. Sometimes those can be broken up into further panels to extend time or more preludes, mids, and conclusions are added to one panel to speed up time. Braieros really does a great job with his action scenes.
Soul Noir
Action scenes are always a special challenge, but for what it's worth I think you did a great job with the framing here. That kick in the lower left especially works well with the lighting.
