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The Narrator
🕑 Added 2023-09-09 14:49:47 +0000 UTCSo one of the most discussed aspects of Part One was the style of the narration. I wrote the narrator to be a bit like the devil on your shoulder, making jokes, tempting you, almost controlling you in places, breaking the forth wall sometimes and largely sarcastic. This went down well with some people, and was disliked by others. I'm writing scenes for Part Two now, so it's up to you guys, what would you like the narrator to be like?
Here's three options, feel free to discuss in the comments too.
Comments
James
I like the sarcasm and fourth wall breaks, feels more unique in contrast with the sea of other similar games.
Jay K
I like the personality but not so much the 4th wall breaks
James
It wouldn't feel like your type of story without some personality in the narrator. That said, I would definitely like to see it dialed down some and used in select places, rather than everywhere.
