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Work Begins On Chapter Five

🕑 Added 2024-01-02 22:08:36 +0000 UTC
Work Begins On Chapter Five
Work Begins On Chapter Five
Work Begins On Chapter Five
Work Begins On Chapter Five

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Daxe

"Stuckage" What a word, I've got to get that into the story somewhere...

Scrib

Hell yeah, always down for some stuckage.

Daxe

Honestly it's comments like this, it's nice get positive comments. And the negative one's too, that's the main way I know what needs improving.

Yuri7

How about the skinny characters feed the fat chracters until they burst out of their stuck situation?

Red Nior

Happy New year

brendan johnson

Option to share snacks or eat them dictates which character has the embarrassment (loud belch or stuck scenario) which leads to comfort food and shenanigans or hurt feelings and threat of being kicked off team. Definitely want a sneak peek of Ash/MC's glutton arc coming to an end.

Bob Billing

That double belly be blowing my mind

James

A couple of different ways I imagine this could end: 1) Alissa gets into a food coma and passes out. Lots of ways for that to end (the character on the end having to rouse her being one). 2) Alissa gets told to leave the auditorium because she obviously cares more about food than the lecture. 3) This leads to the professor having a conversation with the cheerleading coach. You can do very different things from there, but maybe that helps with some ideas.

jlixirium

Happy new year! πŸŽ‰ Thank you for all of your continuing hard work πŸ‘ Out of supportive curiosity, what are some of the most gratifying things you’ve gotten out of your project so far? πŸ˜„


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