EverydayAstronaut
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Small Sat launcher dialogue cut review!
🕑 Added 2021-05-21 02:30:39 +0000 UTCAlrighty-roo my friends! I've got a fresh dialogue cut you can watch (or mostly just listen to)! Put this on and see if you hear any problems or if I say something flat out wrong or misinformational. Don't forget, dialogue cuts have no B-roll yet and it has jarring cuts between takes, so don't worry, that'll all be fixed up by the next cut.
MPORTANT please put your notes IN ORDER here - https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1HB7dw4o9dQv_rvWI2G5jFNd_sukyoct_9RlW841Mpb4/edit?usp=sharing
That way we don't have the same comments over and over and we can keep the feedback efficient.
Thanks so much everyone!!! Video will be done by the end of next week!!!
[maybe wait a few minutes so it's not in 120p mode ] - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5n_JT02dZq0
Comments
Good information. I am not as schooled on all the rocket types and had a hard time following. A quick photo shown on each rocket type as you discussed it would have been very helpful.
I know this won't help but it sounds good. I did not catch any errors.
The music is quite laud compared to your voice.
I don't know enough about rockets to comment, but I think you should keep "vacuumised", that's just my opinion though. Nice work as always!
"Don't forget, dialogue cuts have no B-roll yet and it has jarring cuts between takes, so don't worry, that'll all be fixed up by the next cut."
The segment intro at 3:46 mins is BLANK with cool background music. Is that intentional?
I still couldn't figure it out from my phone. But I can edit it fine on desktop. I'm 10 minutes in and enjoying it so far. Excellent work as always.
Everyday Astronaut
Fixed! Thanks for letting me know!
I’m unable to edit the sheet. If I click the link to open it in the app (because you can’t edit it in a browser on mobile), I’m taken to the Apple App Store. Then when I click Open to go to the app, it doesn’t load the sheet.
