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Soviet Rocket Family Tree dialogue cut review / preview!
🕑 Added 2021-09-07 21:55:16 +0000 UTCFantastic news!!! The dialogue cut of "The entire history of Soviet Rocket Engines" is done and ready for review / preview!!! [currently in 240p, but 4k should be done soon]
SOME IMPORTANT NOTES:
YOUR FEEDBACK SHOULD GO IN THE GOOGLE SHEET, but only AFTER you read this ---->
This is a DIALOGUE CUT. It's VERY rough, there will be spots that get tighened up, edits smoothed out, color gets fixed, sound gets improved, and most importantly there'll be MOUNTAINS of vital B-ROLL and visuals on screen for the final cut (as always).
That being said, please take notes of any factual errors you may hear or if you have any burning questions or suggestions you feel like need to be addressed. At this point I'm not looking for specific script feedback (we're well beyond that) but more like "You said 7,520 kN when you mean to say 7,250 kN", really just looking for errors, not personal conjectures. Again, feedback should go on our google sheet [link below]
Here's what you'll need:
TIME: A LOT. It's over an hour and a half long. You'll have to be very committed to make it through a VERY DULL VERY BLAND DIALOGUE CUT haha
The Script: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zvkk3Mw4rmo_-CK0b3HHdzz6qme_qZNmtZ8cx7Jovlc/edit?usp=sharing
The FEEDBACK page: [PLEASE KEEP COMMENTS IN TIME STAMP ORDER] https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15Jvcz_9X3zbLFtm-sH7jq68W9pjUmCgV_1eRCP1KayA/edit?usp=sharing
The chart: https://lucid.app/lucidchart/invitations/accept/inv_f8be8772-8479-4683-8434-cc14e683a0c5
And lastly the video link [currently in 240p, 4K render should be done soon]: https://youtu.be/UEQ3v3CNRbg
Thank you so much!!! It's happening, slowly, but it's happening haha. The next two weeks will be busy with Inspiration 4 and traveling regarding that, but hopefully we'll make some progress here by the end of the month to show you with the big chart and what not. This thing is insane!!!
Comments
Can someone tell me the rough cost for spacex to fly falcon 9?
Nice vid Tim, keep up the good work!
Daniel, he's actually pronouncing ISRO - India Space Research Organization.
One minor thing I noticed, and I reran the section a couple of times, is where you said a particular engine flew first in India but explained it was sold to Israel due to sanctions. Perhaps I am mishearing, but how did India get it from Israel.
Tim, very nice job. Yes, I will have to watch it again to see the renders, etc. That should help me put it all together.
Cody 'dradis' Ruthko
OMG, it has become a reality! Gonna make some lunch and have a watch. This has made my day so much better. Thank you for the early cut of the video and for all that you do for the community Tim. It's appreciated very much! Have a good day.
Sorry Tim, I couldn't help but put in grammatical errors and a suggestion or two. Great video though, can't wait for the effects to be added!
Brell Persovin
I like your way of building your VID "factory". Makes "us" a part of building result. Keep it up :)
Amazing! Looking forward to finally being able to orient myself in all those RD's and NK's and what not :) Any chance for the chart to be also available in some print-friendly version? Seems worth it to print to follow a 90 minute video, haha. I tried making a copy, change background to white and scale it to fit on three A4 pages, but the font is still too tiny. There is a lot of white space between the boxes though, so it seems it could still fit three pages with larger font. I don't know if the sw allows to scale all boxes at once without changing their positions though; at least in the free version it seems like a box by box job to me.
I liked it very much! All my comments were already posted in the google doc’s. Can’t wait to see the finished product.
Love it! Thank you!
Everyday Astronaut
The engines drawn out. You will need a free lucid apps account to see it
What is the chart? Can't seem to access it.
YES! YES! YES!
