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Crimson Eternal - Book 6 - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2025-11-02 22:56:51 +0000 UTC

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WolfShine

I think you're imagining things tbh. There isn't anything different from how I usually write from what I can tell. I write fully instinctively. Whatever pops into my head as I write. That said, I will be shifting the focus back to her exploring soon in the latest chapters with more focus on the planets themselves. After she finishes watching the important parts of the tournament. Albeit after a time skip.

JayBird_IDGAF

So not trying to come off like a dick, even though it is precisely what is going to happen…. So I’m sorry in advance. First, let me say you are an amazing author and I love everything you have written so far that I have read which is mainly just this book and I’m looking forward to reading everything else. Also, I am most certainly not dogging you like an asshole when I say this But that being said, I have to make an observation that is merely my own opinion, but it is still an opinion. So the last couple of chapters of book 5, and the first chapters of book 6 Aria is complaining about how War and the MC collectively between the two are doing a lot of monologue and blah blah blah useless conversation. When in fact, the entire chapter has been no real conversation no real interaction between her and anyone else it’s been nothing but her Dialogue and just useless chatter IMO. You’re writing has never been like this before I mean every once in a while you’ll be like several paragraphs like this with you know, information that’s needed, but then you bounce back to conversations and people talking and you know normal stuff, but not entire chapters and not chapters back to back to back to back this is getting Kind of mundane TBH. Any chance we can get back to your original style of writing? You know people talking back-and-forth, information that is alluded to or that we find out through conversation between 2,3,4 people not just fed to us directly. I mean writing with no dialogue is just boring. It reads like, I don’t know, an assembly manual you know?

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Tftc!


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