Remnants Of The Past
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Monthly Update - March 2024
🕑 Added 2024-03-31 11:06:51 +0000 UTCThe end of Act 1 is approaching! Chapter 9 is written and almost revised. This week, I'll dedicate time to give it one final look before coding it. I've also been editing the previous chapters and incorporating all the changes I had planned. Some are minor details, but there are a couple of significant changes that I prefer to keep as a surprise, although I can say that I've completely revamped a couple of scenes.
To start with, my attempts to make chapter 2 less info-heavy aren't going as I thought. I wanted to trim down some of the explanations there, but I can't. The characters need to know everything there. Still, I'm tweaking a couple of parts to make it easier to understand and less confusing, or at least I hope so, lol!
I'm also making some tweaks in chapter 1, like Leire/Luca’s scene at the end when the MC asks them to accompany them home, and a few details here and there in each route. I'm adding more details and changing a couple of scenes with Ada/Omar throughout the act that I didn't consider initially but that are important for the character.
Lastly, similar to Ada/Omar, I'm changing the mood in Rayco/Gara’s scene in chapter 2. They were very out of character before. Although they do try to keep their distance after the revelation, their cold and serious attitude isn't like them and didn't feel right. The same goes for their scene in chapter 5.
In summary, lots of changes this month, lol! I just need to edit chapters 7 and 8, add chapter 9, and do one final detail I want to share with you when I publish the complete act, and then it's all set! If I continue to be this productive, hopefully everything will be ready before the end of the month!
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Have a fantastic month and see you at the end of April ;)
