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Kaia the Argent Wing Chapter 86

🕑 Added 2024-07-08 01:02:00 +0000 UTC

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Pyro Hawk

Whilst the ending was that combination of sweet, bittersweet and trollish amusement, I have to wonder if the actions the Pastor has done here might not be able to be used to punish him and his God in the future. After all, it was called out that this is a time of seeds, which means that just as the conflict has created a seed on conflict between Kaia's group of communities and wherever the Pastor's group ends up? It should also have created a 'seed of betrayal' regarding what the Pastor and his God stand for. Extremely unlikely to happen, but I can't help but wonder what might happen if said seed gets used to impose something on said God in the future. Probably not something actually dangerous due to the fact they're the stronger deity which suggests they've got other communities already following them somewhere (on Earth or elsewhere). But what might happen to their faith if they get something like 'Must accept Traitors/Betrayers into their following' applied to their growing religion? I'm pretty sure nothing particularly good in regards to inter-community relations once that becomes known, which it likely is when other deities and abilities come into play. Though it's not purely a downside (like I said it couldn't be) as if played right, then the Deity could become one known to 'forgive sinners' and 'redeem them' thus playing off needing to accept Traitors as 'allowing everyone a chance'. Which would cause even more interesting results if the Pastor is representative of said deity's faithful overall.

Kaiyalai

What an ending! It’s been a good book, and while the conflict with Pastor Thomas felt like it was a bit sudden in when it occurred, it had clearly been building (and ‘oh we’re doing this NOW’ has been the theme of the scene) Looking forward to what comes next for Kaia, and looking forward to what comes next from your writing, too!


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