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[NR] Numbered, Not Named - Chapter 762

🕑 Added 2025-12-11 04:04:16 +0000 UTC

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SerpentiCat

You didn't indicate that the old man was a rabbit kin until " From the house he ambled over from another rabbitkin pops their head out, ". There was mention of ears perking up but that was not an indicator of any race. He did mention his whiskers shaking so that indicated animal kin or folk but it could have also been a metaphor. I actually consider general description of a character important to establish an common image in readers' minds. If it's a human man that's at the high end of teenage years in a human only world then calling him a boy on the verge of adulthood is a great start. If it's a young adult female catkin in multi civilized sapients world then species, then calling her young catkin woman is a nice visual imagination starter package. Sorry for rambling. It's late.


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