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Fates Parallel Chapter 435 - Far

🕑 Added 2023-11-06 17:40:55 +0000 UTC

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CringeWorthyStudios

Loved this chapter! It was nice and refreshing to have a bit of slow not-insane slice of life while still having some progress. Cheers!

DarkTechnomancer

I know what you mean. I have some conflicting habits of both driving the plot forward at breakneck pace and also developing a lot of interwoven plot threads. If you can believe it, this book is my attempt to wrap up more plots than I start, but it seems like I was only able to tackle one of my habits v.v

Keith Rice

As much as I appreciate slower slice of life chapters, this one was... pretty slow. I feel like the entire thing could been condensed into Yue/Dae presenting the solution using the moon spirit, and then Yoshika calling Rika on the newly repaired communication device for an update (which is probably going to happen anyway). About a quarter the length, with more narrative progress to boot. The fact the entire thing focused on secondary and tertiary characters made it feel more like an interlude chapter. I wish the narrative would pick one or two of these plotlines (I'm partial to Qin Zhao and setting up the country's government, but I'll take any of them). Right now we have... 8 or so... that are lurching forward?


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