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Book 3 - Chapter 53 - Packing

🕑 Added 2025-02-24 23:28:03 +0000 UTC

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Irish Not Sane

I think that would work extremely well

Shannon Livingston

Yeah, I didn't want to describe the war (maybe in side stories) but give enough info to let people know how much of a big deal this actually is. Maybe give casualty report in next book before the incursion pops off?

Irish Not Sane

It gives enough information without being over done or bogging down the story. Information dumps are always difficult but this was done well for the current storyline. I think you would have to actually use a different character who is actually going to Mars to truly explain what’s going on and that sounds more like an entirely different story to be written.

Shannon Livingston

Gotta have Teddy tempting fate. It a classic

HikinBear

“I’m not taking any chances,” I muttered. “You never know what might happen.” Optimists get disappointed, Pessimists are like: “Called It!” tyftc


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