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TH - Book 2 - Chapter 42 - Foul Play

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 19:53:48 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

The canals are deep... really deep. Calgary undercity is 15 floors deep, but was excavated more after the upper city was created. Vancouver is probably 10 floors deep, seven under water. She could probably extend her legs the extra length, or hang from the roof, but like you said... then there'd be no action :P

Kahunabob

Typo: The sudden shift sent *me* tumbling towards the edge... --- Part of me is wondering why Grey didn't take both of them across in the first place. She can turn into a damned Kaiju, right? She should have more than enough nanite mass for that. Then again, we wouldn't have this cool chapter that way.

Irish Not Sane

Very nice ambush and I suspect Wind’s natural but controlled fear that was increasing should have been an extra clue an ambush was coming. I’m very impressed with the fact she could keep fighting despite that.


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