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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 34 - Mental Anguish

🕑 Added 2024-12-16 18:56:09 +0000 UTC

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Michael Yust

Maybe not so much of an idiot but greedy and acting as an idiot because it serves a purpose.

Shannon Livingston

Samurai, or someone that wasn't informed that she was there... I like the idea of the attack to rile up the sides, but we'll see how much I keep on the refactor.

Shannon Livingston

YW

Freya

Tyftc

IJustWannaRead

Well now, someone blew up some of her stuff…maybe they don’t realize just how fucked they are now? Now you’re up against a full company/small army of samurai tech that grows every day gunning specifically for you, only person I’d think would be dumb enough would be another samurai that’s either well into tier 3 or just had massive balls…but I don’t see a samurai of that level using missiles that can be stopped by city AA, so maybe it’s just an idiot

Shannon Livingston

One of the reasons I want to do some major reworking. The corps are swarmy, but they shouldn't be that stupid. I realized that I set up Phillips as this smart CEO, and immediately made him an idiot. It didn't sit well with me. We'll see if I can change it into something I'm actually happy with

Joshua Millins

Surprised Teddy isn't using the non-lethal ammunition and shoot the idiots while letting the smart ones talk it out.


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