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TH - Book 2 - Chapter 8 - Apex Predator

🕑 Added 2024-12-31 16:47:00 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Millins

From what I understand the M-21 is fully capable of messing up Cat-2 Samurai and or war mechs on the regular. The fact the girls are uniquely suited to tactical forethought is good. They aren't dumb or impatient kids. Teddy would have been near merced by a M-21 if she was as new as them. Since the bots wouldn't attract the attention of the M-21 she would be prime target. Only saving grace is her small size making a hard target.

Shannon Livingston

Yeah, looking back early TBoB had some serious issues. I wish I'd had the experience I have now when I was writing book one and two of TBoB. It has the investment in the SOL parts, but out of that many of the character moments could have been improved. Andre did his best, but he was still just one man against a monster. I'm sure he'll be missed... by someone...

Joshua Millins

Damn shame, but good writing. Your getting good at the darker aspects of story writing. My only true complaint in TBOB is the lack of investment. The Seattle arc is almost empty of character investment. While the catacombs arc is very heavy handed to the point it feels hollow. There can't be a good story without investment. He might of been a prick but in this era of corporations who isn't? He did his job and he did it well with what a normal can accomplish.


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