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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 24 - Collateral Damage

🕑 Added 2025-01-03 20:18:45 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Millins

If this was a case like joytoy where it's a Hivemind entity it would be in character that they slip up from time to time. But Teddy is not willing to accept that much compromise in her person so being Ursa Major is intrusive enough for her. Though an upgrade to Beargadier General is definitely in order. Side laugh: It Would be hilarious if Bob modified himself to be a walking combat suit. Take the term bear hug to a whole new level.

Shannon Livingston

Yeah, Teddy has no problem killing antithesis, but she has a problem killing people... even those that deserve it. Tearing their toys and empires apart on the other had... Well then, lets see what happens if people keep poking the bear!

Shannon Livingston

Nodders. Gotta write Teddy, who's worried about people, and using the bears as an extension of herself. Also, more violence. Teddy doesn't pull her punches when she's pushed.

Joshua Millins

Nicely done rewrite other one had more paunch but this one feels like Teddy, not the bears being the driving force. Last couple before rewrite felt like the bears were getting away from her baseline.

Joshua Millins

Teddy is not far from that level of F.A.F.O. she doesn't want to hurt people but if push comes to shove people will die and her hands will be clean.

TheFoud3er12

I'm too used to stray cat smh. She would have shot all of them execs long ago


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