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Ghost in the City: Early chapter 212

🕑 Added 2025-01-31 21:48:35 +0000 UTC

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Zebra Von Claw

The scuzzier elements and depressing parts really remind me of Fly Trapped in a Jar by Modest Mouse

Slayer Anderson

Doing a reread of the latest chapter, and I couldn't help but think of Motoko releasing a hit album. 'High Crimes & Misdemeanors.' Songs like Heathens, No Rest for the Wicked, etc... Still waiting with interest to see what happens with DaftPunk's stuff.

Zevi

I hope you'll feel better soon. And your writing in this chapter is still excellent.

Andrew Armstrong

Another thought occurs that Matoko has been the only proactive force in her life for a while, her enemies need to step up their game. I mean she hit the Raffen and Scavs hard in the past, has at least one enemy in both the Tiger Claws and Maelstrom, Is gaining more and more rep to the point others are going to seek her out for recruitment or a rep of their own. And none of this is even considering the corps that have been affected by her.

Andrew Armstrong

Kinda want to see some key players point of view on Motoko like for example: Wakako wondering at her survival despite her ignorance, Alice reflecting on her jealousy of a teen, Judy praying that the next Virtue she gets has no heights or bare handed handling of organs, Hiromi wishing and dreading her crush finally notices her attraction or Jun privately realising that his sister is a badass and vowing to never let her know he thinks so.

Just A Dude

I can just see her ending up being known as the one the Big Dogs go to when they need a pinch hitter, which give her reputation-by-proxy since if someone that can X calls you for help then OBVIOUSLY you're X+1.

runedead56

Just a suggestion but what you could do make more afterlife gigs is to have makoto being a facilitator in setting up larger gigs for the afterlife mercenaries. Sort of like how V and Jackie had to get the Flathead for the plaza heist gig. Afterlife mercenary Crews aren't going to want to split the big Payday of their major gigs to someone who's not a full-time mercenary of their crew but would be willing to hire infiltrators to lay the groundwork for those big gigs. This would allow my Mokoto to gain afterlife reputation without having to be tightly associated with any single crew.

Ripstick 12

Im pretty sure this is a (indirect?) callback to her first (third) kill, when Ichi was holding down the guy and he realizes he’s about to get killed he starts fighting back. The burya was probably mostly for threat: don’t do anything and I might not shoot, him telling her to shoot him basically meant it was highly likely he’ll try to do something, mercenary instincts kicked in.

Neferyti

Composers used to write songs as a gift. If Makoto forgets a birthday, sings a song as a present, the others will want "their" own songs. Just saying...

Seras

Thank you! I like having random little gigs like this pop up in the story. They aren't always easy to write. Coming up with something new, is hard, but it gives a real 2077 feel like you're just walking around and you get a call for a gig and do it, and then continue on towards the gun store you were heading for in the first place or something.

Homeless One

Can't wait for Moroko to introduce Heathens to anyone, be it section 9 or the band

Zenopath (AEV)

"... as I was already drawing my Burya ready to fire, but the bullets were coming my way.". Edit= weren't

Gardor

Wish she hadn't shot the guy, and killed him silently. There isn't really a nice action scene that necessitates ruining her stealth, she just runs down a hallway and jumps out a window. Just think it woulda been cooler if she actually ghosted in and out, but still loved the chapter. Pretty neat seeing her next to actual mercs, and not the teenagers she's collected, really shows how top tier she is.

Jacob patterson

Best Saturday morning cartoon ever ❤️

Dwayne Parker

I walked around for a moment as if just doing checks as a security guard, until I found what I was looking for. The black “Security Only” Letters on the door told me I’d found what I was looking for. Repetitive Other than that, great chapter. I do like the done-in-one format for the side quest-y bits.

SUP Dood

Thank you for the update and letting us know of your personal situation. I hope things settle down for you soon. If you have the opportunity, I’d say take a spa day to relax. It’s something I do and I drag my friends to when something similar is happening to them.

senPIE

Hope she does more jobs 🙏 love her work love seeing it from other people's perspective

Bable Zmith

And yet still suspicious as hell, as we track by movement. Also known to be a nervous habit. Also as a no hair hat wearer, I often have to readjust, but as we're talking about a lowering of the brim in an obvious hiding movement... suspicious as hell. It could also be an obvious movement to distract watchers from whats really going on. Very subjective also, as the 'subject' is being scrutinized in a situation requiring security. And this is the clincher, We Don't Care If We're Objective At All. Everyone is suspicious, everyone.

Alex Moffatt

This was a fun chapter -- thank you. Take the time you need.

Heidao

Besides her secret assassination, she's never publicly done anything "wrong" against the TC. She has record of aiding in the war against Maelstrom, is a pseudo-member of Kamikaze, held in high regard by many TC execs and influential members, the shadowhand of Wakako, and personal assassin of Hayato. By calling her Yurei, she became a Named TC ganger in their eyes. The return of the Afterlife crew brings many opportunities, even if Hiromi will get pissed that a job passed through without her. While the possibility to recruiting them into Section 9 would be near impossible, they are still a resource of knowledge and experience. Each of them are specialists that could be hired on for training if S9 expands with new members and teams, sniper training, blades and guns.

STORRM

man that was like a breath of fresh air, i put heathens on loop for the whole read lol

Konner Morris

You could say he wasn't handsome enough.

Joe Bill

Also awesome infiltration and rescue. Seriously just having the whole mission in one chapter is so nice, it feels like just accepting a mission, meeting,intel,plan,go is just so well put together

Joe Bill

Seriously take a break when you need one! Slowing down releases and being healthy irl probably increases the lifetime number of chapters… so win win for us all haha

nugitoBambino

awesome chapter! loved it! This is an actual question, not like me trying to solve writer's block or something outrageous like that. Does that old adage of write about a brick in great detail to get the juices flowing work? It was told to me that describing it in nearly painful detail makes your brain work better for other ideas out of desperation. I was told that in high school by an English teacher and a decade later it still bumps around my head, but I'm a STEM kid through and through (with a guilty pleasure in Rhetoric and Philosophy - shhh don't tell the other analysts I work with) and never got a chance to actually see if it helps since I don't have the patience to write fiction haha.

Alexander Jonsson

It also something I do 100% as a habitual hat wearer, with long hair, it's only unusual if you're looking for it, but if you see metal head Jeff adjust his ball cap every 10-15 minutes, it blends in. It's situational, subjective, not objective.

Just A Dude

Yup. The old adage about "Cary a clipboard and look like you know what you're in a hurry" is spot on. Trying to look inconspicuous just draws attention.

runedead56

players: Hey dm, I know we screwed up last session. But Some of those rolls were bullshit. We want to rescue sam, but we can't find a realistic way to bust him out of a corpo Tower. What can we do? Dm: well... I do have my makoto ninja dmpc that might be able to help you out. Players:.ok but If it's too much to ask, can we see the rolls That your obvious ghost in the Shell Major copycat makes? Not that we're upset that you're giving us an out here but last campaign we had her she practically squad wiped the combat encounter. And we didn't really get to do anything. DM: yeah that's fair. We'll have her open up with infiltration and see how far she gets And go from there. I doubt her rolls are going to be that absurd This time. End of session players and DM: WTF!? What are these rolls?

Bable Zmith

Okay, Loved the chapter. But, when she goes under the camera and tugs the cap lower is one of the things that stand out to a security guard. As a former Sec. Spec. it really stood out to me as one of the 7 manerisms that we are trained to look for. It is a dramatic body language (added to increase tension in TV, Anime and Movies) that screams 'up to no good'.

runedead56

It's all good. I'm just glad you're not dropping the story all together. You got a real life to deal with and you have other stories you're writing. So I'm glad you're keeping this one updated.

Garrett Cannon

i miss the BDs in this story. She can become a legend with just a couple BDs

Seras

Yeah for some reason my formatting goes wonky.

Mariana

I absolutely loved this chapter, had me so focused and tense while reading about her sneaking through a corpo building

Dopplerdee

I love seeing Mikoto from the outside.

Fae Reveil

love always having a song recommendation XD

Just A Dude

That's because it's technically Yūrei not Yurei. It's the Japanese generic term for "ghost."

Eifer

Happy to see you're gaining interest in continuing this one at a more regular basis. Just remember to listen to your gut and don't burn yourself out, yeah? <3 Sucks with the sickness. Hope you'll be well and on the rise soon. Thanks for the chap!

Kuro_Neko

Great stuff. Patreon seems to have messed with your formatting though? Or is that just me? I'm seeing double spaces where there should probably just be single spaces.

outlaw

Wooooo!!!

matt

No your thinking of Hakarou, the old swordmaster from Slime.

Sullivan

Thanks for the new chapter And take as long as you need!

Alex

Oooh, yes! Thanks for the chapter! I love how her rep as a Rockerboy is starting to get arround and she didn't outright deny it! <3 Lol, that stealth gig ended up like most of mine: ghost in and "accidentally" murderhobo my way out. How else are you supposed to do all the searching for loot? Sheesh! Also, did we see the first hint of Gun Fu there? Even without the perk? Loved it!

Seras

He's a unique character, lol Not meant to be Hatake Kakashi. I just wanted a Street Samurai character for Bishops team.

Seras

Honestly Bishop and the Edgerunner team was sort of made to represent a normal TTRPG team. In my head that's pretty much exactly what they are.

Straven

Oh this one was fun to read! A delightful read, thank you for that!!!.

dicloniuslord

TFTC! Nice to see her go Gray Wolf…… huh now i kinda wanna see her katana spar against one of the team in the mech

Lord JJ

I pavloved myself into tasting jammie dodgers whenever the Heathens song plays, cause when I was a kid I bit into one when the chorus hit.

Apeljohn

This little adventure felt very much in the spirit of the original Cyberpunk paper-and-pencil RPG. It was like listening to a fun war story from a gaming group. Cool vibe.

Teatime42

He definitely doesn't wear an eye patch and read from a small mysterious book.

heh

Motoko, you happen to be a very cute murderer but you seem to be lacking some self-awareness

Sansaucy

Hakase sounds familiar, is he from the TRPG? Saw him in another fic as well I think?

Stefan Landshut

I was thinking exactly the same thing. It's funny how sometimes we can't see ourselves in the mirror xD.

Dangit889

Wooooo! I sure hope that whole gig was recorded. Another Ghost ninja BD!

PantherTheory

I love this story so much, it's also the first fanfic I ever read; it will always have a special place in my heart.

Carrotglace

Badass ninja assassin confirmed: life goal complete

Mark

Shoot him. 💥. I loved it.

Subby

Holy Shit, I loved this, I hoped so much to see these characters again.

Vexdt

Great chapter I hoped that something would drop today (I refreshed even at your usual time ;) ) hopefully you find your groove since all your fictions be it PTV, Ghost or Phantom Star are top of the line!

Giperman

She is unfathomably cool, after all

Crimson Grave

' The boys all laughed and joked as if they were normal people and not well, murderers and gangsters. ' Says the girl with a higher body count then all of them combined. >_>

Giperman

I love it so much. There is something phenomenal about cyberpunk vibe in general, and you manage to catch it every time. Superb.

Bosparan

Yehaw! Ghost is back on the job and Bosparan got his next fix! Best of luck with health and inspiration, but I think we all know there is no forcing either - so however long it takes, it takes :)

Gilgamesh Archer

Apology accepted, not that it was necessary. Thanks for the chapter! Hope life gives you a break, and your muse drowns you with inspiration!

Adam

TFTC

Freya

Tyftc

Jesse B.

Wooo!

Evernigh

More

Seras

As someone who had to do that twice in the last year, you have my earnest sympathy.

FjeldraevenFreiden

Yeeeeees

michael stitcher

I did a happy dance seeing this. Thanks, have been sitting next to the deathbed of my father for days waiting for him to breathe his last, this gave me some smiles for the first time in more than a week.

Robert Apgar

Mira: "Motoko No!" Motoxko: "Motoko Yes!! Oww fuck."

Firefly Fanatic

YESSSSSSS! Can’t wait for her to pick up the bullet deflection perk!

Acquiles Vitorino de Melo Graça

Get better soon! And take longer breaks anyway!

intata

You say you have writers block. But then hit us with a long chapter. You're giving me whiplash. Also, TAKE LONGER BREAKS, OR WRITE DIFFERENT CRAP. WE'RE ALL GOING TO READ WHATEVER YOU PUT OUT. FUCK.

JTP

Excellent, I always love the alternate povs

Duke of Coffee

Motoko doing The Ghost. Pity it is not a full stealth run, anyway hopefully the group manage to get away cleanly without a Corpo chase around. 😜

White Neko Knight

I really enjoy the rescue gigs. They're always more involved and complicated than the "kill everyone" gigs. Hope life improves for you Seras!

Nathan R Chase

SquEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEeeeeee

Thereader

i miss these chapters i like your other works but this is the best in my mind.

Zayne

Tftc!

Danny R.

Love it! Thank you Seras!

Cole Deucalion

Cool, thanks for clarifying.

Seras

Not Kurt Hansen. Just a corpo Hanson.

Cole Deucalion

That wasn't Kurt Hansen, right?

TheDudeAbides

Google translates Yurei to "Oil cooling" lol

Pancake33

Ah yes, my withdrawal was reaching dangerous levels xD Thank you for the chapter! As always, long term over short term, we don't want you to become an Afterlife drink for a loong long time!

Robert Apgar

Yeeeeeessss


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