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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 27 - Line Breaking

🕑 Added 2025-01-09 16:39:25 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

Thanks!

Psyren G

while it matched forward -> while it marched forward

Shannon Livingston

Although superhero landing is one of my favorite ways to push Bob into a fight, it was sadly not appropriate here. This superheavy is the closest thing we've seen to serious AA in the story until now. Since dropping wasn't an option, he had to run! I dont know if it was completely clear what was happening, but I imagined Bob had to anchor every time they fired at him, just because the amount of kinetic energy would push even him back, even if it didn't damage him.

Shannon Livingston

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Shannon Livingston

Thanks, glad you enjoyed

Shannon Livingston

Hmmm... I knew it looked wrong, but autocorrect insisted. TY

Kahunabob

Lueteniant -> That should probably be lieutenant. It's both the French and English spelling :)

Joshua Millins

Should clarify, the Shortfaced running bear is like a larger, meaner, hungrier grizzly on steroids.

Lord DragonRose

Yeah for Bob! Good rewrite.

Michael Yust

Do.Not.Poke.The.Bear.

Joshua Millins

Was expecting a superhero jump from somewhere on the undercity onto the superheavy with Bob doing his best impression of a pissed off fuzzy can opener also known as a grizzly. But him doing a shortfaced running bear works as well right location for it as well in Calgary on the Prairies.


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