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Book 3 - Chapter 30 - Entrenched Position

🕑 Added 2025-01-13 17:44:06 +0000 UTC

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Kyle

No worries, like I said, still a great story. I'm maybe just getting a little carried away with my desire to see Teddy bust out the bear-operated-guillotines.

Shannon Livingston

As mentioned in a previous chapter the council has Samurai level encryption, which is better than Teddy's Class I intrusion catalog. That's why they haven't just scraped all the information already. Teddy is smart enough to understand what her friends are saying, destroying the government without having a plan is probably a bad idea. We're not talking about shooting one person, like cat, we're talking about completely removing the entire top level bureaucracy. Imagine the fallout from destroying the sewer dragons, but with multiple utilities. Sure the city would survive, but it'd be in rough shape for quite awhile, and she'd probably be stuck helping until the change over. That's why I had Teddy pivot. We had an entire chapter (and a half) of talking and planning and I realized that she'd be like: Screw this! I may not be able to take down the council this instant, but I can certainly fuck with them and improve the situation. So, she's going to do the next best thing: Try and drive the fighting outside the city. If they go, the situation improves. If they don't, Teddy gets to take her frustations on their forces. As I mentioned, I spent nearly twice as long as usual on this chapter compared to usual, and I'm still not 100% happy with it. I had to set something up, but I wasn't sure what. Maybe I'll come up with something more interesting, or want to change it up tomorrow, but I need to think about it some more.

Kyle

As much as I'm enjoying the story, this sort of feels like they're making a big issue out of a small one. I mean, "On no! The Council will delete the taxes, government databases, and payroll."? Actually, I got a ways into typing up a whole complicated plan, but it should be as simple as having Nyx hack a new corp into existence for Teddy, scraping all publicly available data on the Council off the internet to compose a list of as many of their assets and employees as possible, and sending bears to detain every executive level employee within city limits while officially notifying the external portions of the Council corps, the invading corps, and the people of the city that TeddyCo has taken control to prevent any more attempts at slaughtering civilians. The Council corps can write off everything within a hundred kilometers of the city or lose significantly more than that when Teddy goes to war against them, the invaders can cease all offensive operations for a month and then begin negotiations with Teddy or have all assets within a hundred kilometers of the city destroyed, and the people can cooperate fully with TeddCo forces during the regime change or fuck off and not personally benefit from all the security and aid she'll be providing during the transition.


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