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Ghost in the City: Early Chapter 215

🕑 Added 2025-02-27 17:02:06 +0000 UTC

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Owlfurret

I just came off of that. I was in there 22 hours. It helped

Bable Zmith

SPOON!!!

Chet K

I've never had that. I think it's because I can only picture my own voice in my head while reading

White Neko Knight

Nope. I get that way with voices. Like "This isn't how it sounded in my head". Not visuals.

Seras

Honestly the whole netrunning thing is hard for me. I didn't have a good idea of how it worked in the TTRPG to start with, so I kinda just made up a lot of stuff, and I continue to do that. Mostly to try and have it make sense in a lot of ways.

Seras

Thank you. I just try to explore all the parts of Night City that deserve more attention, and exploring the setting is fun!

Seras

Thanks! I really liked Malcolm's Haunted house analogy that annoyed Motoko so much.

Seras

Yeah. I really REALLY needed that break, I was so burned out on GitC I was struggling to squeeze out three pages a day, and I was missing that more often than not. I had a few rough chapters while I was still struggling, but being able to write other things let me get back into why I like Motoko so much. I'm happy to be 'back' so to speak.

Z H

If Motoko really wants to troll Sasha she should start sending her clips of the old Nuku Nuku cyborg cat girl anime. Sasha won't know if she should feel threatened, insulted, or inspired!😸 Also Yoko continues to be the best!🦊

Cyrus McEnnis

RomiTech Light Industry presents the BFG-101 "LaserMail" direct laser com set. "Why ship it when you can RomiTech it!"

Zevi

Another excellent chapter. And I personally find the netrunning chapters more interesting than the music ones.

Happy

Nice.

Sup3r J4k3

It could cause minor discomfort, thus not triggering any defenses. She could then sell it as an 'annoyance be gone' quick hack for lobbies. Alternatively: it could be used to the issue the 'boot' feature and kick anyone but the owner from the server.

Sup3r J4k3

Glorious!

Chet K

That's super interesting. I never knew there where people who can't. So you never go to a movie that was based on a book and go damn this is not how I pictured them.

Duke of Coffee

Lol Motoko, you always get swindled by a fox. 😜 Anyway old tech may have its uses, Motoko will need improvements on her weapons and that stray cat huh... at least seeking forgiveness is in order.

matt

That's called aphantasia.

Esotericbill

Great chapter, and now motoko has a basic laser design to improve as her tech levels up. Next thing we know, Hiromi will be opening a factory and going into the arms dealing biz with her revolutionary designs.

White Neko Knight

I imagine them as shadows, with no defined shape or substance. I find it amazing that people can visualize characters as they read.

Esotericbill

well...other than the fact that giving anyone the excuse that she's training for the blackwall could end up with netwatch trying to kill her. Better to just keep her mouth shut and let them wonder.

Chet K

So that's the art style you imagine

Gilgamesh Archer

Thank you much. Nice to get into her INT skills again for a bit.

matt

Motoko is the Major, but without her huge rack. And a lot shorter, since the Major is 5'6.

Veileihi

The writing is great. Feels like you're more motivated for this story now that you've mostly taken time away from it.

Derek Palm

Yay new chap

Hangwind

And I just had the thought of her in Abridged Alexander Anderson cosplay explaining this plan: "I be sendin' the Daemons back to where they came from, so I can follow their souls and sketch out the layout o' hell itself for future raids and mischief."

Bob

Huh, for some reason the malcom and motoko banter was the best part to this chapter. Thanks Seras!

michael stitcher

Mini major ghost in the shell...

Hangwind

Given the revelations she had in the chapter, wouldn't a fun explanation for her need to kill daemons be that she is using their deaths to see how the system reprocesses their data and mapping the underlying architecture of the Net and the Old Net that way? She has already demonstrated an ability to hack things without actually jacking in after all.

Just A Dude

I love how, after so much anticipation of saving her, Sasha has turned into a running gag of annoyance. Also, Motoko once again doing insane shit and acting like it's commonplace. She's a couple points from going full "There is no spoon."

Robert Apgar

I know I know, see new chappie like new chappie I slipped up.

Just A Dude

You waited 10 whole lines?

intata

Man, every time we dive into the netrunning, I remember how much fun it is. Then we get a new murder spree, someone being overly cute, the plot comes up with V, or something else suitably epic - and... Each individual aspect of this story is good enough to carry a normal fic, Seras.

Straven

Hope it gets better mate. Me personally ill be happy to get off work and get home....wilds is calling my name.

Straven

Cat fight active in the lobby!

Straven

Oh god....I literally just visualized Motoko making a hack to do just that!

Straven

Constant mixture and adjustment each chapter....for most characters! Some like Rebecca are always 'short'! I also sometimes take the starting intro to the cyberpunk game, the image shown for the 3 choices to start at to also align a mental image to some degree.

Straven

Thank you for the enjoyable read! Been looking foreword to what she'd come about finding in that little place. Hope your doing well!

runedead56

A pretty simple explanation for why she's wanting to destroy demons is in preparation for blackwall dives. If you can delete a demon so fast that it doesn't send off a notification of its deletion and/or your system intrusion to its Master then you can peruse the data without problems. That applies to both netrunners and AI. If the security systems never give an alarm that you were there, then no one will ever know and until they observe any potential data access logs. Makoto doing black wall training is a really good excuse rather than admitting that it's because XP goes brrrrr.

Paratus

"watching as the my own light, " the=then? or the=

Chet K

Curious, for all the readers here. How do you picture the characters like Motoko in your head while reading the chapter? like the edgerunner anime, the game, the ghost in the shell anime, or actual real world.

DePriest

Good to see the old stray cat back on the beat. Just got to keep a spray bottle handy for when she acts up.

Adam

TFTC

Mark James Reyes

Thanks for this. Made me feel a bit better after my crazy day. Hope all is well with you so we get quality content for this as well 😊😊

Garrett Cannon

ur old writing on the netrunner stuff was just a tad boring except the netrunner arena arc but this was written so much better. great chapter i prefer the netrunner stuff be written a bit slower so i can visualize it better.

Robert Apgar

Only got 10 lines in before I had to like this

Neric

thx you thx you thx you...

Aaron Greene

Yay!

PseudoSim

Mikoto is a liar, she is definitely not bigger than Malcom.

Subby

Yes Motoko you should have brought Hiromi into the cool Netrunner club especially when you have multiple experienced Ladies squabbiling over your attention, she would have protected you, totally, no other reasons

heh

Yup, always good to remember that Edgerunners are not particularly well-adjusted individuals

Owlfurret

Yay more ghost in the city when my day was horrible towards the end. Thank you. This helps


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