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Ghost in the City: Early chapter 216

🕑 Added 2025-03-04 17:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Joyeus

Tftc I can’t wait for when a member of Matokos harem tries to have a date with her, and run head first into the brick wall that is her ability to recognize romantic interest in her

Kara Nina

Motoko did say she wanted a full borg body, yes, but she also decided to hunt maelstrom and scavs until they're all dead. Plans and decisions in this story are about as dependable as they are in reality - ppl change their mind all the time.

lizard King

Motoko has already speeded that she wants a Gemini full body conversion. Since being completely dependent on cybernetic systems to operate is a dangerous notion. Since they're always going to be someone or something who's going to be able to break your defenses. Solution integrate bioware redundancies. Suggestion biotech muscle fibers for movement. Since full body conversions are for the most part custom jobs either way. Might as well do an atom smasher and combine multiple sets of technology for maximum performance. For the muscle fibers use bare muscles as the base combine that with gorillas and integrate them with the electrical conductivity of carbon nanotubes. Be sure that this hybrid muscle fiber composite is also extremely dense and have carbon nanofibers to increase strength and to prove general resilient. Get some multi-functional living organs as just for redundancy. In essence you will get the benefit of both worlds since. Since we fully robotic body will not have the same risk of rejection compared to installing chimeric biotech into a still mostly flush body. You could have way more leeway to really maximize the potential. Chimeric biotech organs should have unexpected beneficial results in a full cyborg body. Keynote reinforce your skeletal structure lifting tungsten titanium and carbon nanotube and graphene alloy. You're skeleton is the sport structure which everything else is built upon. Strong skeleton means it can handle stronger implants.

Zacle

I found Sasha worse this time than the first time we read her POVs. Maybe I'm just in a different mind set. Definitely looking forward to the kiwi/Lucy stuff

Kara Nina

I really hope Motoko and the other Members of Section 9 don't go down the full body mod route because that way lies only cyberpsychosis and we all know by now that she's far from immune to that - plus cybernetics can be hacked. Better upgrade her int and get that special chrome that comes with David's Sandy to hack Smasher than become him.

Sunshine Mademoiselle

Such a nice choom

lizard King

The greatest show of skill in my opinion is to build upon Bartmoss work. And go beyond it his work and truly make it your own. Lot will truly shattered the status quo of cyberpunk.

Hello

Yay another fun chapter of GitS! Really looking forward to seeing how Motoko and section 9’s story evolves over the next couple years (story wise) as they interact more with known characters and situations. This chapter already makes me think we’ll be seeing Faraday and Lucy in the next couple chapters. I Could also see section 9 taking down Jimmy Kurosaki in the future to nab his stuff and get a line on that militech sandy. Pretty sure he mentioned how he put some code in hardware like that to watch as someone goes psycho. Plus handling side quests from the game as they appear in new forms in the story could be real fun, especially for the weirder ones. Also can’t forget about Bartmoss’s deck (personal theory is that it’s a digital copy of his brain that possessed Nix in the game). So many places for the story to go and evolve, I can’t wait to see how it unfolds! Looking forward to the next one, and hope you have a great day!

Seras

Hey that's okay! If you can't afford it don't force yourself! I'm always just happy that people enjoy my stories!

E

Another great chap The outside viewpoints of motoko being a god are always so interesting

Max Packett

Thank you so much for this chapter, and all the effort you put into all your works! The joy that reading your stories brings holds such a special place in my heart and brightens even the darkest of days as I get to adventure with Motoko, or travel through space with Kat! I can only afford this month of a subscription (as broke boyos be broke!), but I just really wanted to support you and applaud the phenomenal job you’ve done with bringing to life such fantastic worlds! Thank you so much for being you and I hope you keep writing what you love (as I definitely love it too)!

Z H

Poor Motoko, once again struck by the Digital Cat Distribution System!

runedead56

Yeah, no. partial success is nowhere near good enough for a Cyberdeck that potentially could have an original copy of datakrash. The potential to either unleash a second datakrash Or undo the AI Insanity is something that would shatter the status quo of the world of cyberpunk. To say of other potential bartmoss software that can probably still run rings around netrunners today.

Bryan

Kiwi was also feeling super unappreciated. Her boss went cyberpsycho and killed his output, then the new boss started blatantly going down the same road. By NC standards, she was loyal for longer than most would be, and taking a payday and getting out was a pretty standard choice (as was her grisly end).

Bryan

Yeah, same here. I get that annoying characters are a thing, but there's a line between annoying the other characters in the story and annoying the readers and I'm not sure this chapter stayed on the right side.

TheLunaticCo

I do love dark stories and it would give the story more depth.

TheDudeAbides

I love that idea. Not that it's actually true about Motoko but that someone gets it into their head that it's true.

Einar Strandberg

I assume a lot of people just chalk it up to either "she's just weird" (and in a world of edge runners there are way weirder) or "none of my business, I don't want to be involved if it's big" (poking your nose into something strange can be a great way to get in over your head).

Zebra Von Claw

We're starting to see more and more people question why Motoko does the thing she does. With her explanation to Victor about the nanobots I've always wondered how people would react if they started collating information. We know it's an OOC game overlay with impossible knowledge dumps and reality warping but from the layman's perspective her loss of memory, freakish improvement, and need to constantly refine and repeat everything that she does sort of reads like she's a sentient ai nanosworm that's bodyjacked a corpse. Granted, that's quite a bit darker than veras' usual direction but i would find it amusing if characters like Victor started thinking they were talking to a new form of sentience, mentally freaking out, and Motoko just doesn't notice.

Halycon404

A yes. Sasha. The character I only want in short bursts in how she consistently messes things up for the same annoying reason. But it's been awhile. Guess we're due her particular type of... Choices. That's a nice way to say it.

Gilgamesh Archer

Seras dropping GitC when I'm already having a great day. Can this day get any better!?

Zyithe

Thanks for the chapter

Zevi

Another excellent chapter. Thanks for your writing.

Devin Ranaldi

Next she needs to reach out about the BD business.

Mr Mouse

Jesus, didn't think it'd be that high, given Nix's partial success

Grant Daniel

Very excited for this chapter. Read through all of this story again and it got me on a bit of a music kick. I was listening to Zombie by The Cranberries and thought this would be a great Motoko song and then I really listened to the lyrics and got slightly terrified of any situation that would cause her to remember and play it.

Duke of Coffee

Everything to level 20 so it will take a long while before Motoko touches Bartmoss deck.

Aaron Greene

Yay!

Kuro_Neko

I'm happy we're getting a resolution to the Sasha thing, that's been hanging for a while. And as an extension of that we're getting Kiwi and Lucy. I wonder if Motoko is going to steal Lucy like she did Becca. Maybe she'll play matchmaker with her and David, though I'm not sure if this version of David would connect with her. At the very least since Sasha is still alive there's probably not going to be any Kiwi joining Maine's crew.

Mr Mouse

Thanks for the chapter Out of curiosity what level did she need to get her Int Skills to before trying Bartmoss' Netdeck, again?

Mr Mouse

Just getting the perk at 10 will be insane, even without the passive gains in skilling up to 14. She should definitely level Programming 14, and then try and grind it out; That and Blades 10

Just A Dude

Heheh. Sasha is just that perfect type of obnoxious you want to see more of. I'm loving the GitC renaissance we're having here.

Garrett Cannon

getting a sasha pov was really crazy to see kinda cool i guess. i want to see motoko really go crazy and clear a huge server with someone outside her knowledge watching her like a rogue AI or netwatch and them be impressed.

Joseph Schultz

Lovely chapter! Netrunner Motoko is always fun to see, as are the sweet sweet numbers she gets, lol. Sasha is...Sasha, I always vibe with pros who absolutely refuse to behave professionally. Sasha takes the idea of professionalism out back and empties a full magazine of bright pink bullets into it. Super excited for the Sasha-Motoko vs Kiwi-Lucy battle! It's hard to tell from the show how Motoko will match up in a fight to them, like Lucy probably has better hardware, but Motoko has both a ton of merc experience and her System abilities. Also seeing Kiwi try to deal with Sasha will be funny, so this new little arc will be tons of fun! Plus Lucy! Wondering how those dynamics are gonna work, with Motoko being so leary of Kiwi, and Kiwi basically being Lucy's mother figure. Ahhhhhh, I just want to read it! The pain of being caught up is real

Straven

Thank you very much for the delightful meal and future upcoming delights!

Duke of Coffee

Well, it is time to meet Kiwi and Lucy in the Net. Sasha as always is a attention seeking cat to Motoko viewpoint now they manage to let bygones be bygones, as they say guess you should never meet your heroes. 😜 Anyway that challenge better not be a part of the betrayal plot being set up... 🤨

Velleity

POVs of other characters are always fun, there's just something so interesting about watching her through other people's eyes. She's just to humble or to acclimated to her own skills she doesn't realize what she looks like from the outside.

Neric

Thanks you for the chapter. Thanks you for more Lucy.

Crimson Grave

Soon her Quick Hacks will hit 10 and she can put points into it to achieve Meta Game levels of bullying.

STORRM

man i really love other POVs of motoko

GrimV

I liked Sasha a lot from the video, but this version of her is so damn annoying. I usually devour these chapters and am surprised when it's over but this was a fight and a half to get through :')

Derek Palm

Yay new chapter

Bynx

Hell yeah! Love seeing Sasha again, and I'm suped for Kiwi & Lucy vs Sasha & Motoko :D I also hope Lucy recognizes Motoko as the crazy girl that jumped off a building heh

Petrox

Kiwi is a complex character. Lucy did betray the gang first, unintentionally, to protect David's ass

intata

Thanks for the chapter!

White Neko Knight

Ya know, Sasha could use a session with Misty. It'd probably help her mental state.

Freya

Tyftc

THE SAVAGE KITTY

Love the chapter

Happy

Nice.

Giperman

Thanks for the chapter. That was hard to read

JTP

Love it.

Trent Cannon

Yeah, I know that feeling. When you fucked something up bad and try to overcompensate to make up for it. Even after the apology is accepted you still go a bit overboard trying to make things feel like normal

Will Iam

Thanks for the chapter

Teatime42

Hm, wonder if she'll try and matchmaker them

heh

Ooh Kiwi and Lucy! I’m so excited!

Robert Apgar

New chapter, preeeem.


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