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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 34 - Missing in Action

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 22:59:30 +0000 UTC

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Kahunabob

The plot thickens! I found some typo's: "They tried to drip a plate on people" -> drop a plate. "I left a small contingent of bears to keep the area secure, and *** the council members to the Family HQ, and now we’re heading back." -> missing a "send", "escort" or "deliver" where the *** are.

Joshua Millins

So long as it doesn't reach Hatchetman levels.

Joshua Millins

Hel does realize that Teddy does not forgive she may forget, she may tolerate alot of things but she isn't so kindly as to forgive. Drugging Teddy? At the moment Teddy is reasonable but once that cocktail wears off Teddy may not trust or Forgive Hel again in anything more than a Family Mouth piece and more likely treat her accordingly as a corpo mouth piece.

Michael Yust

I know Mirage is the go-to bad guy here but this doesn't seem like his deal. This is more likely the work of a Denver operative who if they are a vanguard were convinced that Teddy was just going to kill the council and that would mess up the whole invasion. As that would prevent the Denver corpo's from transferring assets. Edit: “They tried to drip a plate on people, they deserve it,” I grumbled. drip should be drop

can

all of it they are trying to help someone get a way with mas meder how is he still a samurai

Shannon Livingston

It's coming! I'm just trying to decide how much is really acceptable against another samurai

TheFoud3er12

I'm being edged by the idea of teddy doing some violence tbh


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