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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 49 - Stir Crazy

🕑 Added 2025-02-17 18:42:31 +0000 UTC

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Irish Not Sane

So there is a drug problem in her past, that’s the biggest thing I needed to know to understand this and I fully understand it. I watched my older brother being tased on live on a news broadcast because of his drug problem so I do understand

Shannon Livingston

Hmmm... maybe I can look at that part again. It wasn't meant to be them just brushing it off, but more of a 'oh... I get it' moment. They both know her reason for hating drugs, but now that I think about it, how is the reader supposed to know that? as for forgiveness... it'll probably come, just not quick. Maybe by the end of the book (but probably not) I'll have to think how to structure it. If it doesn't make it by the end of the book, Hel will probably have moved back to Seattle.

Shannon Livingston

I do plan to have that reveal, sooner or later. I maybe should have revealed that information when she had the fight with Hel, but it's a little late for that now. I'll try and work that into the next book, perhaps while working with Leah

Shannon Livingston

She's not shrugging it off, but she's not commenting on it either. Both Jane and Alan know how much she hates drugs, so it was more of a 'Oh... I get it' moment. As for Hel... they may make up one day. It'll take some time for Teddy to get past the betrayal, and then they have to actually work together. Since Hel will probably be heading back to Seattle before the global, might take a while.

Joshua Millins

Teddy hates drugs irrationally so. She has seen what they have done to masses of the undercity and refuses them in any capacity aside from medical nanite inhalers. Book 1-2 showcase this pretty clearly, she all but snarled at Nyx for offering them. Hel drugging her against her will no less? That's beyond a violation of trust that's outright betrayal of Teddy's ethics. There's also the chance she sees some corpo bullshit involved with drugs and wants no part of their methodology. Though a little context about why she hates drugs so much would be nice. Maybe a now dead character who lived with them in the burrow that got hooked and died to either bad drugs, a deal gone wrong or in a turf war between gangs.

Irish Not Sane

You really need to give us something to justify the anger at Hel about the sedative (which was needed) and Jane just shrugging it off doesn’t fit her character either. Interesting idea on Teddy trying to cook and it’s nice she found something other than those dam bars. Should prove interesting and as I said, she needs a hobby that keeps her active.

Eyes wide

Not going to lie i kind of hoped she would make amends with hell. She was just trying to help her friend it comes off as a bit petty and Jane just brushing over it felt weird. The hurt in hells eyes when Teddy booted her out of her ride was sad. Thanks for the chapter. Forgiveness when no harm was intended is surely healthy


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