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TBoB - Book 3 - Chapter 51 - The Red Menace

🕑 Added 2025-02-20 17:42:50 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

True... maybe I'll look at that.

jaskij

That "You're dismissed" at the end rubs me wrong. It's something a superior officer or a nasty boss says to their subordinate. Not someone herding cats with egos.

Irish Not Sane

She’s to perfect for protecting the city but some of her bots are perfect to send to help map the actual Mars problem

Shannon Livingston

Nope, probably a couple more. Think the epilogue might be the samurai armada leaving earth. Perhaps Teddy and Hel having one last talk... Gotta think more

Shannon Livingston

nodders

Shannon Livingston

Still haven't decided if Teddy going to participate or not... on the one hand, it'd be one hell of a fight. On the other hand, Teddy is NOT setup to face the big shit. That's why she took perimeter duty instead of fighting the forty four. She is really good at garrisoning the city while everyone else is gone...

Shannon Livingston

Maybe. I wasn't planning on sending Teddy to mars for a couple reasons. But that speech, and the explaination gave me pause. The thing is, Teddy might seem like she's built for Mars, but she really isnt. The bears are effective against hordes of small to medium size antithesis, not big stuff. Her forces struggled against low twenties until the moose were upgraded, how would they fair against thrities to forties? Probably not well. She does make an amazing samurai to garison the city. Plus she has stuff she's working on here... On the other hand, mars would make one hell of a book 4. Some characters definately not coming back from Mars. Teddy and Co lost four samurai against a single forty, so a planet of them? Yeah, the Class IIIs not going to do well. They are going ot be backed up by the big boys, but casualties happen. I'll have to think on it a little more

Kahunabob

Well now. The March to Mars. If you aim it right, you can start your Mars Arc on March 1st. Probably impractical, the Nerd in me would applaud it. I'm not seeing Teddy volunteering to go. She's got the biggest peacekeeping force in her city. Maybe some of her friends will / should go. Maybe it's a way to kill off some of the minor characters that aren't as loved by the fanbase?

Irish Not Sane

I knew Mars was coming but I didn’t expect Teddy to be part of it but her bots make sense for sure and she’s got enough to help protect earth and fight on Mars.

Joshua Millins

"And so it begins"

HikinBear

I always love the term “...make the right choice…” It never benefits the person being told. Great chapter! Is this the cliff-hanger end of Book 3?


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