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Under the Light of the World at War: Early Chapter 56

🕑 Added 2026-01-31 02:04:08 +0000 UTC

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Joyeus

Kimi is being seduced by the rogue!! Quickly Dorah, dazzle her with your shiny muscles!!

Red panda

I thought about defense of helm's deep😅

WannaBeATree

I get the feeling that the kingly message was a bit naive. Was this the best he could come up with? I think he either didn't have much time to make it, didn't have access to counsil/editors or isn't that skilled. I guess he is treating very unfamiliar ground, so cutting him some slack is okay. He seems to be trying hard. The description of the door closing event was very nice! Somehow reminded me of 11.Sep and the towers. The live feed on all channels etc. when everything just stopped. That the thought even popped into my head for a second was great writing, even if it wasn't by intention! :) I feel that the situation in the city is much worse than we readers think. For a gang of teenagers to steal a wooden toy... yeah. I suppose they don't like the conjured food and try to get money any way they can to buy real food. An even darker interpretation would be, that they really did it for the toy alone, which implies serious psychological trauma of the young generation. Or perhaps taking something from others in an effort to fight off their internal belief of powerlessness and helplessness that the forced evacuations created. Elin could have told Dorah that she's looking for a ladder. The fact that she didn't, says a great deal about her character. One explanation is, that she didn't intend to help and only found the ladder by accident and changed plans. I don't think this is what happened. She wouldn't have a gang of people who trust her, if this was her modus operandi. More likely is that it was a preplanned escape route, since she probably knows the streets and was the one who directed their escape that way. (Dorah probably got browni points for helping her without prompting) Another explanation could be that she hates not living up to expectations? So she tries hard to either not create any or only create negative ones. So she can underpromise and overdeliver later, so to speak. If that is true, it points to a though childhood. One with crushing expectations and lots of negative feedback for not accomplishing them. It also implies that she is someone who is able to create these expectations. Either through talent, effort or something else. Love the chapter! A lot of foundation setting for the future! :)

Heidao

And with that, materials and supplies are going to be rationed, the bread lines serving summoned food will be strained further. Now with everyone stuck in one place, I'm wondering when the main House will suck it up and make a call for Dora's family to visit. As this is the time for many Houses to consolidate power with so many people trapped in the city, and all the talents and skills in one place to snatch up to use. Whose got more mages to make food, who can get the healers in their pocket, who can gather the most fighters and militarists under their banner. An Enchanter House who not long ago proved their prowess and legacy, by producing a prodigy that boosted arcane knowledge enough to receive a merit, is a very juicy target. Cause this is all they could do now, everyone's in one sandbox, so war prep, crime and intrigue seems the easiest things to do. Also, school arc

Mark

Time for Dorah to activate munchkin mode and embrace her home alone Christmas special!

Seras

Stuff doesn't get a "Lv" modifier until they hit level 2. It's just a weird quirk my stat page had.

Zeroingdark

Fletching is the feather part if I remember right. The arrowheads were blacksmithing.

STORRM

[Fletching Lv. 2 19/20] i feel like making 100s of arrowheads should of given this something

Bat

Amazing chapter! Happy to see the developments with her two friends. The Trolls have come!

Tarik Ira Canessa-Wright

Amazing chapter! A couple mistakes I noticed on the character sheet: Last chapter she made more progress on Divine Strength so it should be [Divine Strength Lv 7 11/70]. Also missing levels in the following: -[Spell Reflect 1/10] -[Arcane Subtlety 1/10] [Devotion Aura 6/10] [Resurrection 1/10] [Cure Disease 1/10] [Heal Lv 4/40]

WannaBeATree

She seemed to always be that way though? There was just not enough time to see it. Comes with being kind, but hiding it under a hard shell. It does actually take time to see under the shell. People who don't want to spend time to really look or know a character will always miss out on these types. While Dorah would have missed out on this type as well, Kimi is borderline forcing her to interact with it. So she is slowly seeing that there can be a lot of goodness hidden under a "bad" persona, even if she does not want to acknowledge it yet. It is good training for a future paladin. ;)

Cypha

You did really well with this chapter in making Elin’Kor be a lot nicer and being friend group material than during her initial appearance. Well done there. She is still roughish but not as extremely shady / assholish. I think you really "rescued" the character. :)

Minidiamant

As much as I agree you should have a bunch of friends and different friend groups, I think early on in life it’s more important to have a a solid base of a few friends, and simply be open to people in general. More friends will naturally come as you grow and you get more possibility to share your interests.

Rhys Henderson

Sick ass chapter :)


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