Ghost in the City: Early Chapter 240
🕑 Added 2026-02-09 03:43:56 +0000 UTCComments
Fortunis
😆 🤣 😂
RandySalacious
She did end up doing a few scav raids in heywood, most notably the one where she was stacked up on the door before an unfortunately timed phone call pulled her away to (i think) attend the meeting with brick in fujimuras bar - though i'd remind you the initial meeting with padre was less taking on a gig to hit a specific den and more padre just giving her the info on all the local dens because he wouldn't mind if they were removed.
Andrew Armstrong
Quick question did Motoko ever get around to doing that Scav Raid for Padre when she first met him? Also feel the need to recommend City of Night by Miracle of Sound for a future song.
Benji
Are you still having difficulties with plot ideas for this story? Cause I recently reread the whole thing and I might have a few ideas for plot points
jeff
YAAAASSS MORE MOTOKO BDS!!!! Can’t believe I almost missed this chap, thank u sm for the update!
Vysirez
I do love this story. You do such a good job of showing Motoko just having fun and doing her thing, then the rare contrasting POV where we get to see what she looks like to other people. It's great.
Jørgen
Please more Ghost, much more please, so more more Ghost
Lunatic
"enough to throw me completely over the back of the couch and lad with a heavy oomph on the cushions." *land* also love the chapter
Stefan Landshut
I think we should be around 2076 at this point?
Ria
What year is it in the story?
Robert Apgar
BRAH that 6th street you caught back there was totally narly.
Derek Palm
Damn it Motoko Judy said no more heights
SquiddlyWinks
It’s only like, 4 stories. Nothing for our girl, especially with a blood bag cushion
David Hoyt
She's going to remember to ask about heights one of these times.
Neferyti
"I call it 'the Good, the Bad, and the Ugly'. What do you think Jun?" "Why did you write a song about you being ugly?" Cue sibling fight.
Apeljohn
> Motoko was reliable about her emotional state. It didn’t vary much. If she was angry she was angry, and if she was happy she was happy. "Fairies have to be one thing or the other, because being so small they unfortunately have room for one feeling only at a time." -- JM Barrie, "Peter Pan"
Minidiamant
Mokoto being happy makes me happy
Robbie Mathieson
Seras avoids specific numbers but motoko probably has a million creds to her name by now. Considering her friend can afford a caliburn. Another is getting high end medical for his grandma and miss manager is investing her earnings heavily.
Jeff091
i prefere to think that any fall, that would kill her without the perk, only half kills her.
Clairvoyant Vision
Does Motoko not already earn enough to afford high end food? How expensive could it be? 1k a meal? 5k? 10k? She’s making a lot more money than game V by stripping locations down to the bolts and you could get quite wealthy as high level game V. I feel like she ought to be able to afford regularly eating real food, no?
WannaBeATree
So, ehm, how did she survive the fall? I kinda thought that she rode the guy down a roof and jumped off him before he went over, but apparently she went all the way? How high was it? Did rolling off really help that much? ... OH! She got the half damage from height perk! Forgot about it! ... wait... does that mean that a fall with terminal velocity would only be as damaging as with half of terminal velocity? Damn... if she ever gets some chrome that allows to survive a fall with half of terminal velocity, she can nearly ignore heights. O.o (Maybe even with some expandable foam grenades or something; lots of examples in video games)
WannaBeATree
Or maybe she's slowly getting use to it? Though I agree. If she is slowly getting used to it, then at least one word should still be all caps.
Benji
I absolutely love the POV shifts, getting that outsider perspective on Motoko. Realising how just bat shit insane she actually is. While I like the music, I love that the story is shifting back to the violence that it started with. It's been a while since we've seen Vik, V, or Jackie. I wonder how V is handling that spy outpost
Artman
Lot of things could have also changed. Let’s face it the timeline is all over the place. The Maelstrom that originally killed David’s Mom could be dead. Our girl Motoko has a pretty solid body count. Edit. Yes it was the Animals, not sure where I got Maelstrom from. But as others have said still probably butterflied away.
Thereader
New chapter so soon I appreciate the effort ps love the pov change.
Lars Spottka
Shouldn't it be about time for the Prototype sandy to show up? I thought edgerunners begann in late 2075?
Skjadir
She did warn judy about that, just maybe far more casual than judy might have liked
Artman
Two chapters in one month, so far 🫰, “We’re not worthy! We’re not worthy!”
Meaning Yellow
He shoulda worn that seatbelt. It's Malcolm's fault, really.
Mr Mouse
I mean she's got the militech job on the horizon, the rich people scouting that was just suggested, the clusterfuck that is 2076, Bartemoss' cyberdeck, to name a few, and she's definitely going to have to squeeze in time to kill some more scavs, kill some music producers, and spend time maintaining her relationships with the Tygers, Wakako, Maine's Crew, Jackie and V, the Netrunners, the Nomads, etc.; Like our girl is ridiculously connected, but that sort of thing takes maintenance, as we saw in this chapter.
STORRM
i feel like that fucking hell should be all caps
Mr Mouse
Yup, though not too early for 2076, which should be coming soon-ish given how long it's been since Sasha and the Biotechnica job
Seras
Not quite yet. Very end of 2075. December in fact.
Teatime42
Ah yes, our favorite gremlin. Motorola Kawasaki
Jesse
Always love it when we get a Judy POV reacting to another crazy Motoko BD. Thanks for another great chapter in Night City.
Homeless One
Motoko beating the shit outta gonks to the theme of This FFffire is such an awesome scene, I had to go listen to the song again after reading it
KarmaA
She sets the bar mighty high doesn’t she? TFTC another to slow to move > too slow to move
Xitaraya
That's going to make a very night city music video
White Neko Knight
Isn't it to early for 2077?
EnderScroll
Wrong question. What you should be asking is how many are going to randomly jump off buildings?
RandySalacious
Killing off ichi was a bold choice, but i have to say i think you pulled it off tastefully.
Barkeep
+ nin nin
Andrew Armstrong
I suspect Motoko is going to get an earfull from Judy for this but that's going to pale in the face of its popularity
Sunshine Mademoiselle
Having real friends is such a blessing!! 🤧 im definitively not jealous lol Thank you so much for all the updates! Each time you update a new chapter, you create a little happiness and excitement, which help to go through a bad day. Thank uuu ❤️🔥
deus vault
So no, I don't think motoko needs to "get a job".
deus vault
Getting a job in night city usually involves something like: selling your left arm to a corpo so you could do the work, getting one that stops working after three months, then getting sued for damages. Finally you have to quit your job because you can't pay the interest on the left arm you sold because the work is not paying enough.
Overclocked
Motoko needs a challenge again. Shits too easy for her.
Straven
Lol! Always a delight to enjoy another Judy point! Thank you for the read!!!
N K
Yes, take those rich gonks for all their worth! I miss the bloodlust of last chapters and a new job is just a new battleground to conquer!
Neferyti
I am imagining some corpo showing up to a concert with his bodyguards to intimidate Motoko. And Motoko rolling in with both Section 9 and Tiger princess (and Tiger bodyguards). Then Motoko starts playing "the Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" for the brain dance.
Rhys Henderson
Awesome chapter
Neferyti
I was just thinking about Judy's reasonable fear of heights. See exhibit: surf board gang member.
matt
The female version of cockblock, a woman blocking another woman, is clamjam.
Melissa Proffitt
I love how Malcolm keeps her grounded! Solid life advice choom to choom. He is turning into a solid guy and I am all in for it.
HikinBear
“Nin-Nin.” That is all.
Robert Apgar
V is definitely not gonna be the top of Evelyns list of mercs to give suicidal gigs to.
michael stitcher
Preem, and hopefully a head settling for Motoko (and Seras 😉)
Orchamus
Judy has gotta hate Motoko's love of heights and falling from such😅 Also Motoko discovering that what she hates is what 80% of the world hates ...their 9-5
WhatAFungi
Hehehe. Nin nin gets me every time.
wanderer117
If we get to the Clouds Takeover, will the Motoko virtues up the game on Judy's super solider skill chips?
Miguel Garcia
Did Motoko just Cockblock Judy with Evelyn?
Miguel Garcia
She is always getting on them about needing to practice for missions though. I’m sure Ichi is just making sure he knows what to do when they need it.
Giperman
It was more noticieable in the previous gitc chapter. We had goody-two-shoes Dorah aiming to be a greatest hero and defender of weak. And then we have Motoko. She surfs a dude from a building and her preffered way of dealing with problems is murder. I've missed her dearly. Enjoying both fics though
Carrotglace
Judy's reactions seem appropriate for what she's witnessing. Also, hey it's that one girl! *points at the screen like dicaprio*
christopher birkhead
When you get some art of her surfing, that dude off the building
Sean
I've missed these slice of life chapters! We're in 2076 right now right? So Evelyn is shopping around trying to use her info? Ugh, I'm going to have to reread for now. My memory of events is all jumbled
Jairo Enrique Quevedo
"Surfs up dude." Motoko, probably.
lizard King
Great chapter as always very very enjoyable. Maybe Motoko MSM music connection to bite some biotechnica genetically engineered pets maybe some cyber dogs dogs with cyberware or some cats or maybe if she purchase a building a cybernetically enhanced bare as personal security she's becoming wealthy and she might want some pet for emotional support for her support news and for fun. I know I feel better after spending some time with my pet. And Seras your break was a benefit for you you're really capturing the essence of cyberpunk in my opinion the break was needed and it was extremely beneficial for your writing for the past two chapters they've been excellent. I cannot wait for the next chapter and have a great day.
TheAngryJerk
Judy chipping in with the Seras sleep schedule. Don't be like Judy! Go to the gym, sleep sometimes, and absorb some Sun!
Fayen
Nice!
Crandorn
Hell the fuck yeah. Motoko once again is a badass, without losing the narrative fact that she is a somewhat immature teenager very unused to being imposed upon by the systems that be. And I wonder if that will cultivate some genuine rebellion. It would be awesome if Motoko running up against the horrors of the corps first hand in showbiz will be the tinder for her spark, and for that to show up in her music. I think the break from GitC did you good Seras because these last two chapters have really nailed *cyberpunk*.
Solplexis
Judy has lost her fear of heights.
Knightfire
I love the contrast in tone between GITC and Light. Its fun to bounce between both.
Crimson Grave
Poor Judy. Motoko's BDs are like the Old Spice commercials to her. You aren't Motoko, but you could be if you weren't a lazy couch potato and got some chrome arms.
Massgamer
Motoko body surfing a 6th Streeter off a building is gonna become a fan favorite for her BD fans, lol. Meanwhile, if Motoko doesn't want anyone playing with her robot she should buy a storage space for it! If not, that means Ichi can play with it if its stuck at his place. Nice to see Malcolm tell Motoko about benefits of an actual job, just gotta do the crap but enjoy the good bits, like getting paid by rich assholes to kill other rich assholes.
Duke of Coffee
Surfing turf indeed. 😜 Judy is going to need more caffeine/alcohol to get off the Motoko high.
Amber S.
It's jarring to got from Light to GitC again, the tonal difference is vast. Great chap Seras!
Mazerii
Judy getting her fix. Wonder how many times she's scrolled the virtus because her edits aren't intense enough. Lots of practice separating between Judy and Motoko I bet.
JTP
Lol, love it! Poor Judy. Are our timelines getting closer together?
A Bellator
Motorola survives a fall from a random rooftop
THE SAVAGE KITTY
More please
Joshua Bradshaw
Love it
Xiosdestro
damn motoko is mean
Aaron Greene
AwwwwYeaaaaa!!! Judy's reactions are always the best.
Alex k
Scared my brother cheering for the chapter 😕
OmegaNano
Nice
Sumo Slap
If your asleep, wake up. If your at work, goto the bathroom. Seras dropped Gold. TFTC.
Cyrus McEnnis
Oh man, I love it when a plan comes together!
Andrew Bazhaw
Oh I've missed Judy
Vista
damn i love watching judy's reactions to BDs
Nisiris
Nice start of the day! Oh Judy, I love how tsun tsun you are about the killer gremlin.
M0och
Always happy to see a GITC chappie
OrakBarama8D
Yes!
Aaron Greene
Yay!!