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Book 2 - Chapter 43 - Up in the catwalks

🕑 Added 2025-03-18 20:12:40 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

Nodders

Irish Not Sane

On people living where they want, had a homeless mother and son who froze to death under the railroad underpass, turns out both were millionaires who wanted to live as homeless. You caused those they know that we know scenes to run through my head, a much needed laugh and cities/states will do everything as cheap as possible (as a state worker I guarantee it) so I’m not surprised by the catwalks

Shannon Livingston

So many errors 😭Yeah, I'll fix em soon, had to get things out, because have to take family to the airport. Thanks for the checks!

Kahunabob

OK, we're in the Scooby Doo tracking phase of this part of the arc... Can't wait for the excrement to hit the oscilating ceiling device again! Couple of typo's / edits. 1. Sorry. 2. I really need to find time again to help with the Google Doc edits. I’ve seen a lot of damage *to* two supports to the east ... -> add the 'to' They considered maintaining the bridges, but it was easier to send gondolas down *than* scissor lifts up. And then the squatters appeared." -> replace 'then' with 'than' and lose the comma. End the sentence after 'up' and start a new one with 'And'. You're falling in that multiple comma runalong sentence trap again 😇 It’s harder to see the supports from up here *since* they’re not lit up as well as the bottoms are, -> replace the comma with 'since'. This is a sentence that's fallen victim to the same comma trap. This helps with readability.


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