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Sovereign Stones (SS) - Chapter 1 - Rugged Living

🕑 Added 2025-04-11 23:38:11 +0000 UTC

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White Neko Knight

Yay magi tech! Or even just tech with magic! This story might take over Teddy as my favorite story of yours.

Irish Not Sane

Thank you, that helps me tremendously as I know fully understand where we are in the story

Shannon Livingston

Yeah, going to be another theme. Kingdoms are a little stagnant because of the reliance on magic, both the use of and the constructs. The MC is willing to give new ideas a try, anything to even the odds.

White Neko Knight

Yay food! Also yay guns! I always love seeing what magic can do to fire arms. I hope they're not set aside.

Shannon Livingston

So... I tried to do a more subtle start, back at the village, but because the MC has her magic and system cut off, it's harder to get that part of the story over, and hook readers. Based upon the timetable in my head, it'll be chapter 6 or 7 before we start seeing it. That's why I swapped to a glimpse of the future (but probably still book 1) it's much more fun than the two attempts I had before.

Irish Not Sane

I’m loving the food obsession already and while I was hoping for more backstory to prologue, I’m certainly going to enjoy the building of the town and the introduction to the main characters as they do so. I’m very much enjoying what you’ve started and I hate you for the cliffhanger start


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