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TBoB - Chapter 30 - Chemical Interaction

🕑 Added 2025-04-29 17:38:07 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Millins

I agree it feels disjointed from the story somehow. Like it fits the narrative but not the characters.

Irish Not Sane

I agree there’s a flow problem with the story and that final conversation between Helen and Teddy, it doesn’t sound like Teddy despite it being what Teddy feels and does. Overall it’s fun and while not what I was thinking of from the family (I forgot about CBeRN) the missiles were something I did expect as I remember the Rods of god from book 2 of SCS. Still feels a bit random but I’m not sure if that’s because of the pain pills (rolling ankles suck) or it’s part of the flow problem.


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