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TBoB - Book 4 - Chapter 34 - Wake up call

🕑 Added 2025-05-06 18:44:33 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

He should, but as I've mentioned befrore... I don't like the way AIs are in SCS. They're so omnicient that every time they intervine it feels like a cheat. Maybe I'll go back and have Nyx be more active in the conversation, I have been mkaing them too passive lately. As for hangover from too much kid time... I feel that! Everytime I look after my neice and nephew I feel like I need a couple days to recover. :P

Irish Not Sane

I was expecting Dusty to be the proper British commander who maintains his clam even as the shell explodes at his feet and that’s basically what we have. Love the fact you gave Teddy her full family time and had the perfect emergency ending for that time and yes I’ve forgotten you can get hangover from to much kid time. Teddy really should upgrade her communications as well and I know you hate having the AI butting in but Nyx really should be making recommendations for upgrades beyond the simple cheap beyond what Teddy is asking. She should also be giving more warning on what’s possible with the plants. And now that my rants done, I never want you to stop writing your way.


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