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Book 5 - Chapter 24 - Access Denied

🕑 Added 2025-08-19 17:01:10 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Livingston

The thing about that is... It'll be handled, but it's tied into another Fanfiction. Fata Morgana: Revelations. Alia hasn't got to that point in her story line, but I'm setting something up. If she doesn't get there, it's not a huge loss, the full setup only took a quarter of a chapter. I thiink the rest was good, which is why the visit took so long. I just had to push things forward at this point, or I risked making the story 80+ chapters T_T

Izzay

Its fine, its important to actually tell stories about teddys kids. This is a real weakness of the verse imho, stray cat being a prime example. I'd enjoy some growth/timeskip though the characters now seem a bit static and stuck in their roles

HikinBear

Relationships between characters can be time consuming. The trip to the beach and the amusement park were time well spent. It could have been shorter, but it wasn’t excessive. The thread with the illegal lab that didn’t go anywhere could be cut.


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