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Imaginary - Chapter 25 - Lunch Hour

🕑 Added 2025-08-21 15:35:40 +0000 UTC

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HikinBear

Let me walk this back. None of the above are criticisms. Your stories on Patreon and RR could be considered the Beta version because I’m assuming you’re going to publish someday. Every imaginary world has rules and I’m just trying to understand what those are while looking for discrepancies. Hopefully my poking isn’t going to spark anger.

HikinBear

While Tam does open doors for her friends, it sometimes doesn’t make sense because of the size issue. All three of her friends are described as Huge, yet fit into whatever room they want to. That’s why I assumed they phase through walls when needed. Chapter 8: Hairy apparently liked them staring even less than I did, because he ran back and forth between the different people, trying to punch the gawkers, or force them to turn away. Of course he didn’t accomplish anything, but it did make me feel a little better. - So it’s implied Harry cannot interact with people. Chapter 18: “Time to go!” Angelica cried, her tentacles wrapped around Olivia, Pam and myself and yanked us backwards. - So Angelica can interact, but I wondered at the time if this was because a rift had formed. Because... Chapter 19: “I always thought they were just figments of my imagination. They’ve never been able to interact with anything until the market!”

Shannon Livingston

I don't think I ever said they could phase through walls, Tamera had to open the doors for them before, but they did seem to randomly appear places.

HikinBear

Something has changed with Harry. He is manifesting differently. Before they could phase through walls. Now Harry complained he needed the Loading Dock because it was the only way he could get into the building AND he physically handed the MC a sandwich. Since Harry is, at least partially, physical, he can be seen by other humans? The plot thickens.


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