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New comic - Rough draft
🕑 Added 2021-07-30 04:08:16 +0000 UTCIn between streams I've been thinking about what happens after Maku and Inheritance. These are very unfinished, some need to be redone, but I thought you might enjoy reading them.
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Rachel Bennett
This has a LOT of potential! Please keep this one going.
Her Pony
Keep in mind that sex offenders can be someone who compulsively masturbated in public once and got caught. I'm enjoying the story already - very scary fun, having that much power over someone's very identity.
Bilbono
I like the fact that dealing with magical beings in a Cora setting is equivalent to this http://www.mspaintadventures.com/sweetbroandhellajeff/archive/001.jpg If they want to cook the books in the Demiurge's reality temple so that you have commited tax fraud they will.
ethan
the sex offender is a bit weird pedophiles rapist etc not the sexiest of people
Kommi
Yeah, definitely the same boat... I love the idea, and even generally ok with mental changes. But giving someone a criminal record via magic is not cool. @.@;
Little Napoleon
I'm impressed by the quality even at a rough level like this! If it means being able to explore more of your ideas or longer forms, I know I would be more than happy to read comics drawn at this level.
SuperTaster
Matter of Taste: Honestly I love the idea, but I'd want to see something where the magic does good things instead of haha I lied identity rape. The sort of thing where someone would ask for their record to be changed, knowing that there will be parts of that change that they won't like, but also bits that make it all worth it. You could even have the witch give her "toy with the mortal" clause up front. "Yes, I can rewrite it so that you were always a girl, but in exchange you have to let me turn you into a horny dog girl."
