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Ch190-Fool In Love

🕑 Added 2022-02-01 04:19:11 +0000 UTC

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nugitoBambino

I believe this was gone over in an earlier chapter. I.e. that (i) Faust's use of Qi gives Sylver this feeling and (ii) his Qi capacity/heath is totally shot from drug use. My understanding is that Faust is like a former top athlete that's been doing meth and drinking heavily for months and is now trying to flex his Qi so hard he's risking the Qi equivalent of cardiac arrest.

Mario Morales

Ha! Maybe I'm the weirdo but I really having things explained to me/Ria. It makes the story much more understandable for me. Heck any time Sylver explains anything to anyone I find myself going, "Oh so that's what's going on."

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Daniel Mallais

Amazing chapter as always!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Enzo Elacqua

I gotta say as much as I dislike Ria’s naivety, and feel she is a bit too obvious of a tool that allows you to be able to constantly describe why Sylver does things, it’s nice that she keeps him honest. Though I would appreciate some confidence on the readers ability to be able to figure out why he does things, you don’t have to always give me the reasoning just some past plot points, and then I can do the math. Plus giving the readers some leeway keeps them interesting in reading

Jordan Burnett

Wait, there won’t be another January post tonight?! Unacceptable 😉!

Gardor

I think you did a good job describing what Sylver saw re: the sleeping Leather Worker, while making it seem mysterious and dangerous, while also creating a sense of tension. I think you did a bad job of most of the above when Sylver got to the gate, specifically stuff about him feeling like his face was being rubbed with sandstone without explaining why, or whatever was going on with Faust.

sinra

muhahahaa first to comment! love your story kenny! keep up the good work and happy lunar new year to anyone who celebrates it!

Zonk

Thanks for the Chapter!


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