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Ch218-What’s In The Box

🕑 Added 2022-04-23 22:43:15 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

sri kalyan mulukutla

Ok so coin flip he avoids but he actively jinxes himself whenever he starts a new job/quest? At some point this should be explained.

tibbish

I'd actually disagree a bit about saying that last bit is good. Sylver is supposed to be fairly powerful, experienced, skilled, and knowledgeable (if not wise) about all kinds of things. Yet for some reason as the story goes on he feels weaker and more incompetent than ever because A) hardly anything he does works out and B) as time goes on he gets more and more mashed up and beaten down. Its almost become predictable at this point how things don't work out for him and how thoroughly he gets beaten down despite being supposedly quite a bit more powerful than he was at the start. I still like the story but for me at least I think the author should shake things up once and a while by letting Sylver actually accomplish some stuff without it all going wrong all the time on him.

Octaeon

That thing about the hoops - I was just getting ready to post a comment saying how predictable the structure of the plot was. So far, basically every major thing Sylver wants to accomplish requires that he does at least two things for someone to give him the answer. On its own, it's not that bad - except, to accomplish these two tasks, he needs to do another two things - for each task. And each of THOSE tasks needs another two each to accomplish. I feel like he's at the third layer of this now, at least - currently on his way to kill/sterilise shield girl, in order to release the dragon, to tell him where Edmund is. And to do that, this would be like the third thing he needs to do. And the thing is, each of those tasks, SOMETHING happens that complicates things, but those complications practically never being him closer to his goal. Now, I was saying that I was preparing to write a comment like that (which I wrote just because), but this twist seems to be going in the right direction. So, in short, good job and keep it up.

Definitely (Not) a Necromancer

No coin flip because of trauma

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

nugitoBambino

agreed! that said, this was a very "Sylver" chapter for me. Instinct, followed by thinking and options weighed, followed by a conclusion of decisiveness. Felt right to me

Enzo Elacqua

Gotta say chekrov smoking gun is not a thing when the mc is aware of it. It’s an interesting thing about sylver and this story

Crombell

If you need more time to comfortably write these chapters out, do just tell us and take the time you need I, for one, would consider your mental health and writing quality significantly more important than writing quantity


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