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Vineyard Story for May 2022 (ft. Zavvari)

🕑 Added 2022-06-02 01:37:24 +0000 UTC

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Eisotopius

Ah, yeah, that's a good catch. A lot of the time I end up thinking about two sentences at the same time and never notice until ages later, so that's a good thing to catch early. Should be fixed now. And I don't particularly mind the quiet around here, and I don't really expect too much to come from people just telling their friends about it, so it's mostly just a "Hey if you know anyone, that'd be cool". I've got some ideas for ways to try and get things a little more lively around here myself. Hopefully I'll have the energy to make those ideas real.

Ray Tracer

Pretty good story. By the way, I found a typo "that moment was enough for her tail to instinctively raise her tail". It's no big deal, but I figured you might want to know. Lastly, getting friends onboard from the last post. I'm afraid I don't have any friends that would be interested. I'm only saying this so you know you aren't being ignored.


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