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Sketch #431
🕑 Added 2020-08-10 11:10:48 +0000 UTCThe first image is what Wondollar sent me. The second is what I sent back, with the following comments:
I didn’t describe it right because I thought the princess on the thug’s shoulder would be facing the other way (ass forward like in panel 4). I LOVE her expression, however, and I’d keep her in that position. I think just flipping the characters would be fine. In panel 4, I think we’re missing the “bummer” line from Cindy. And in panel 5, the text should be between quotation marks since it’s a continuation of her line in panel4.
Oh, and kudos on Panel 2, it’s brilliant.
Anyway, other than the flipping in panel 5 and the Cindy line in panel 4, it’s awesome. Go for color.
--Jaycee
UPDATE NOTE: I had to remove the image I'd put there due to Patreon policy violation. I apologize to anyone the image may have offended. Won't do it again, I promise!
