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Bonus Comic: Every Superman TG
🕑 Added 2024-12-15 16:30:01 +0000 UTCUsing the Animated Series Artstyle, this comic is alright for the most part. I think the art has something a bit off about it, some of it is way too heavily referenced giving it kind of a stiff feeling especially on page 2.
This is another one where on going to color it and thinking about the script I just had no idea what past me thought the hook was going to be. TG Kryptonite is one of the most overused tg mechanisms in all of fanfic tg and in this one Lex literally just holds it out like 'yes here it is, the tg rock!'
Maybe if I was a bigger fan of Superman I could transform this into something a little more interesting but as it stands its a perfectly fine addition to the enormous pile of 'Superman gets boobs from a rock' genre of tg works.
Comments
Morgan Allsing
not bad but i can see what you are getting at.
Nichole O'Conner
It may not be innovative, but if it works, it works!
