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🕑 Added 2023-11-11 14:58:26 +0000 UTCThanks for your patience.
You guys really need to thank Dr Mark for his outstanding performance in turning this around in less than 36 hours. I only got this to him late thursday night and he had it back to me in the early hours of this morning.
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Flyingdoc
If you read back -although they are living together they aren't actually married.
Jeff Hughes
I'm curious about the quotes around husband and wife in relation to Chris and Jane at the end. " while her ‘husband’ brought..." & "over his ‘wife’s’ shoulder..." are two examples.
Flyingdoc
Many moons ago we were told that Mary was a journalism major and Amanda was going to be a primary school teacher.
ron see
Another great chapter. Amazing work as always Dr. Mark
Javier Delafuente
Amazing chapter I’m curious on something and I probably just don’t remember or didn’t “read it properly” but what are Mary and Amanda’s careers?
glennog
Another outstanding episode. I have never read a story with such compelling characters and intricately woven plots. Truly outstanding 👏
Azaria
Excellent as always. And yes, a big thanks to Dr Mark for all his work!
David Long
Outstanding! Gordon’s reaction to their cooking skills was awesome. Chris and Jane, wow! Can’t wait until they join everybody.
