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Unleash?

🕑 Added 2017-11-19 03:53:37 +0000 UTC

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Misty May

Ahhhhhhhhhhh.... Female, maybe 25-35, city dweller, but there's a good chance that a male character is going to wind up saying it. I literally just started writing, and ran into the issue right away. (I'm trying to figure out what Mrs. Naroti might exclaim over the phone when she get the news about what had happened to Chihaya (drowned and unconscious in the hospital) waaayy back in 'Diving Girls.' Literally line #4. More "a suitable exclamation" than the actual meaning of the words.)

savaster

Male or female, and which age group?

Misty May

Writer's block, culture edition. Anybody know of roughly equivalent Japanese exclamations to "oh my god!" and "good god!?" I don't know enough to come up with any, except that nobody Japanese would say that. (I think.)

Misty May

How much do Chihaya's parents know, and is Chihaya keeping them in the dark? Now on Deviant Art! <a href="https://johnlydiaparker.deviantart.com/art/How-much-do-Chihaya-s-parents-know-716081414" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://johnlydiaparker.deviantart.com/art/How-much-do-Chihaya-s-parents-know-716081414</a>

Misty May

Anybody else ever gotten the feeling that Chihaya's parents don't know what their daughter is actually up to? Me too! <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/15450477">https://www.patreon.com/posts/15450477</a>