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The Captain's Daughter

🕑 Added 2023-04-27 13:00:01 +0000 UTC

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Didrik Svahn

But as Jun has already been mentioned or hinted at it would not be that much of a Deus ex machina in that case

melangalade

you think of "deus ex machina" maybe? a character that shows up without previous mention and saves the day?

savaster

Oh oppsy ;-(

Didrik Svahn

Ok that isn’t how the word is commonly used when talking about stories and writing. Here is a good video that explains what McGuffins are if you want to know more about it https://youtu.be/_HcZluK6vxg

savaster

Not quite, just means a hidden surprise character-)

Nathan Sample

I'm always glad to see a new girl around here! :)

Didrik Svahn

So by McGuffin do you mean something that the characters would haunt or seek out, similar to Saki’s father?

savaster

We initially planned to keep her a McGuffin and have her appear in name only but here she is :-)

Titan1017

My guess is she’s more of a pool diver. You know, for points from judges. And I’ve never seen those types of divers underwater for more than a few seconds. Then again, I’d love for her to tag along with our other girls to a wreck, thinking it was a scuba trip, and being so enamored with the idea of holding her breath for as long as them she immediately starts training.