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AmongUs Story Part47

🕑 Added 2022-01-16 20:35:14 +0000 UTC

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Chudraw

I'm glad! Thank you so much!!! ♥♥

Sakurawrs

Everything seems to read fine to me! Not noticing any obvious typos either. Black is rather not impressed!

Chudraw

Thank you so much! You are absolutely amazing! I'm trying to improve my English to offer you all a better reading experience! It means a lot to me that my patreons help out! This is how I learn from my mistakes! I'm really thankful for everything! I'm so glad you like the friendship between Black and White!♥♥♥♥

Roachbaby

Don’t worry too much about typos, a lot of us English speakers do that all the time, it doesn’t necessarily need to be perfect. However, things like misspellings and pronunciations are different. I could understand how difficult it is, because the English language has way too many similar words that mean the same thing, and that’s why those who are learning English get confused when talking in English. You’re doing very good so far though, I’m liking the English effort and you can always depend on your English Patreons to help out 💕 Also, I’m really liking the relationship between White and Black, I love that special connection between one who’s in a rich kingdom and one who’s a peasant. Those types of platonic relationships really brings out the development between the two characters, and is honestly one of my favorite friendship duos. 🥰💕 I’m really liking how the story is going

Chudraw

Ohhh, Thank you for bringing this to my attention. I changed it up a bit!

Old Lady

My last suggestion is on slide six on White's comment about the engineers' message, it's s a bit difficult to read. I got confused, lol, which is an easy thing for me. I think saying, "If the engineers relay a message to their base, we're fuck." I am not sure about that last comma in my sentence though. Glad you like the coffee! 😁

Chudraw

I'm glad you like my story! It motivates me to keep going when I can make others happy with my drawings!♥♥♥

Chudraw

Thanks for your comment! I think you're right about that. I'll change that right away! I personally think your English is really good! And thank you very much for the delicious coffee again! Thanks very much!

Old Lady

BTW. I 💕 the story! Nothing solidify a couple than going through their first fight. : D Your story is amazing! Thank you for the pleasant experience.

Old Lady

Apparently I am terrible at English and it's the only language I know. My not expert opinion is that you do not need that last "s" in electronics engineers. I believe it's spelled "electronic engineers". But please consult someone better than me. I still cringe at my grammar error in the comment I gave you when I donated to your coffee funds T.T your English and grammar are better than many people I know. You are doing great.