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Emily Lockwood in Deadly Horizons - A Perilous CYOA (S2.1)
🕑 Added 2020-05-02 13:31:09 +0000 UTCThis is a Choose Your Own Adventure where you play as Emily Lockwood. Take Emily and her mom on an adventure around the world with seven different countries to explore and sixty different unique ways for her story to end, each ending is totally different and you get to choose where Emily goes and what she does.
Emily is a detective no more! She just wants to enjoy her vacation with her mom and put her past behind her. But a gang of criminals wont let that happen. But why are they targeting both of you? And why are they following you no matter where you go? It’s time for one more case Emily!
(To play the adventure open the attached html file)
To see 'What Happened Next?' in four endings from this adventure click here - https://www.dropbox.com/s/ci3ait4sreahtqr/1.%20Deadly%20Horizons%20-%20What%20Happened%20Next.pdf?dl=0
Comments
Markus Jones
Hey! Thanks for the support! I love the hospital location too, I remember wanting to just stuff it with every peril I could think of in a medical setting. I've got chloroform, syringes and even a straitjacket in there, it was one of the locations I couldn't wait to write just for all the possibilities. Really glad you liked those chloroform scenes, lots more peril to come in the next story!
Timothy
Heya! New patron here! Loved this story. My favorite Emily story is Coven of Mysterious Lies because I love how she gets knocked out in those. My favorite being the nurse she tries to run from and the Dr. In his locked office. Basically I love Emily being chloroformed lol. My 2 favorites were the night adventures in France because Emily was both barefoot and chloroformed. I also loved in Mexico when she got the sleep powder and immediately woke up to get chloroformed lol.
Markus Jones
Hey thanks so much for the feedback. I originally wasn't sure whether to have the Diana references in there but for a character as innocent as Em there just had to be some consequence from seeing someone die in front of her, I'm so glad those sections worked out well. So glad you liked all the story elements, I know bondage and chloroform will always be a big selling point to these things but the story is just as important to me.
Joseph Cullen
Just finished reading it. The siblings are excellent additions to Emily's Rogue's Gallery and the PTSD she is suffering from her confrontation with Diana was powerful. Maybe's it her personality but I found Emily's mother a bit annoying. That's not a bad thing. The real reason why the villains were chasing them was excellent and that cliffhanger ending was brutal. This was a great story and I need to go back through and see all the fail endings. Great job and I look forward to the sequel.
