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The Wrath of the A-B Initiative - A Mini-CYOA!
🕑 Added 2022-08-13 18:20:49 +0000 UTCIn this perilous choose your own adventure you play as reporter Dawn Meadows. This is set in an alternate timeline where Emily Lockwood failed to stop the A-B Initiative from taking over the world. Playing as Dawn you must now travel to the town of Dream Falls and try to save your friend Becky Carter from becoming another of the Initiatives brainwashed housewives! Will you be able to save her? Or will you end up being brainwashed as well? It's time to find out! (Click the link below to start)
The Wrath of the A-B Initiative by Markus Jones (inklewriter.com)
Comments
bonesteoca
This is an decent premise, but there's a noticeable lack of "Game Overs", in the "Your quest ends here" sense, which is ones of the best hallmarks of your CYOAs. Most of the failures boil down to a paragraph of getting caught, with little more than a "Go back one move" message. Does that distinction make sense? The more "Bad Endings" vs "Death-and-Restarts", the better!
