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Emily Lockwood in A Broken Dream - A perilous CYOA (S3.2)
🕑 Added 2021-07-03 16:39:20 +0000 UTCThis is a choose your own adventure where you play as Emily Lockwood. Take Emily on an all new adventure where she tries to discovery the mystery at the heart of an idyllic little town called Dream Falls. This story is strongly influenced by The Stepford Wives, everyone in the small town is just a little too perfect. Each ending is totally different and you get to choose where Emily goes and what she does.
Emily Lockwood has given up being a detective! Now she's finally ready to introduce Tommy to her father. She hasn't seen her dad in over a year though, and she has no idea why he's choosing to live in the remote town of Dream Falls. This town, like her father, seems to hold so many secrets, mysteries that just might lure her back into one final investigation. But this time Emily doesn't know who she can trust, she's surrounded by smiling faces yet might be in more danger than ever before. Can she discover the hidden truths of the town before she's changed forever by them? It's time to find out!
Comments
Nathaniel
It was well written, even if I didn't like the no-win scenario. (Not my fave). Also a few too many men with walkies abduct you endings towards the start
Markus Jones
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad the ending was a surprise! (Spoilers) Emily cant win this one, it's either submit or be brainwashed. But in submitting she at least gets to keep her mind, so there is the possibility she could one day escape the Initiative. This is the end of her freedom for now but the adventures will continue
Tom Kain
Very well written as usual with the school girl submissions being a particular highly for me. Didn't quite see that being the ending though. Will there be anymore Emily CYOAs or will this serve as the true end.
