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MINI COMIC-PROJECT II
🕑 Added 2023-02-22 15:39:35 +0000 UTCI'm excited to announce that you are the first ones to get a sneak peak at the mini comic script! I hope you enjoy reading it. As of now, I won't be making any changes to the script, but if I notice anything, I will definitely update it. I'm very eager to start working on this comic and I hope you are too. I will be collaborating with 6 amazing artists, but first, I will be sketching out the rough sketches.
Thank you for your support and I can't wait to share the finished Comic with you!
MINI COMIC BEGINS:
Page 1
Red stands in front of Cream, who has her arms crossed and a scowl on her face.
R: I need to leave the spaceship to go on a little plant hunt. Can you please distract Black?
Cream gives Red a disgusted look
C: Why the hell should I help you, a human?
Red pleads with her hands clasped together
R: Please, Cream. These plants are crucial for my research
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Page 2
Cream rolls her eyes and lets out a sigh of annoyance before reluctantly agreeing, still scowling
C: Fine, I'll do it. But only this once, got it?
Red beams with excitement
R: You're the best, Cream. I owe you one!
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Page 3
We see a spaceship in the background. Red pops out of an air vent
R: Phew! Finally made it out! Now to find those flowers…
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Page 4
Red spots some beautiful flowers and exclaims
R: This species of flowers is exactly what I need for my research. I'll need to gather some for closer examination
Suddenly, a huge and menacing alien sneaks up behind Red
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Page 5
Grape stands over Red, who has an evil grin on his face-
G: Well, well, well... what do we have here? Looks like a tasty little snack!
Red has a look of fear and desperation on hers. Grape is sniffing the air
G: Mmm, I can smell your fear, little girl. It's so arousing..
Close-up on Red, who is even more frightened now
R: Please, let me go!
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Page 6
Grape leans in closer, his face now just inches away from Red's. His grin has turned into a sinister sneer
G: Sorry, little one. Your screams will be my dessert
Red trembles in fear as the EZ’NOZ looms over her
R: Please, don't hurt me; I'm begging y-you! I'll do anything you want!
Grape smirks at Red's plea for mercy
G: Anything? How intriguing…
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Page 7
Tears are streaming down her face
R: Please, spare me!
The EZ’NOZ sneers and responds
G: You think I care about your pitiful human life? You are nothing to me but food.
The alien pauses and then adds
G: Although, I suppose humans can also be useful for… pleasure…
Red looks horrified, suggesting that her fate may be worse than just being eaten.
G: perhaps I'll keep you around for a bit longer
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Page 8
Grape leans in even closer, his face now just centimeters away from Red's
G: You know, there's something about you. I can't quite put my finger on it.
G: Ah, I know... You smell- so good.
Grape reaches out and gently touches Red's cheek. Red is still terrified, with her eyes tightly closed
G: I don't think I've ever come across a human with such an alluring scent before.
G: I can't wait to taste you…
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Page 9
Red's eyes are now wide open, frozen in terror and shock, unable to move as Grape licks her neck
G: But first, let's savor the moment.
Suddenly, Black grabs Grape with his tentacles, pulling him away from Red. Grape falls to the ground with a thud
Black is towering over Grape, with a look of anger on his face (Red runs away)
B: What the hell do you think you're doing?
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Page 10
Grape looks up at Black with a huge smile on his face, completely overjoyed to see his old friend not hearing what Black is saying
B: She's not food. She's our ruler's property!
G: Black! I can't believe it's you. It's been years!
G: I'm happy to see y-
Black interrupts Grape by kicking him in the face
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Page 11
Black is shouting at Grape
G: That human girl belongs to White, our ruler!
Grape looks down ashamed, realizing he has made a big mistake
G: I-I had no idea… I would never have-
Black interrupts Grape, cutting him off with a stern look on his face
B: Ignorance is not an excuse, Grape. You're lucky White has use for you, or I would have taken care of you myself.
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Page 12
Grape looks up at Black, determined to make things right
G: I'll do whatever it takes to make it right.
Black gives Grape a stern look, still not pleased with the situation
B: Good. Now listen carefully. We need to find Red.
Grape nods his head, looking serious and focused
B: And we need to find her now
G: I won't let you down, Black.
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Page 13
Grape is flying through the air, searching for Red. His stones on his legs are glowing as he uses his abilities to find her.
G: (thinking) Where could she have gone? She couldn't have gotten far
Close-up on Grape's face as he looks down, scanning the area for any signs of Red.
G: (thinking) I need to focus. I can't let Black down
Grape sees Red still running scared
G: (thinking) There she is!
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Page 14
He calls out to her, not realizing how close she is to the cliff's edge.
G: Hey, little human gril!!
Red is so startled by Grape's sudden shouting that she falls backwards and tumbles down the cliff, falling into the abyss below
Grape is shocked and horrified as he sees Red fall.
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Page 15
Grape rushes to the edge of the cliff and drops to his knees, looking down into the abyss
Black runs up beside Grape, not taking the time to think. He sees Red falling and without a moment's hesitation, he jumps off the cliff after her
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Page 16
Black and Red are in the dangerous ocean water. Red pops up, looking shocked, confused, and still very scared
The waves are crashing around them and Red is struggling to stay afloat. Black quickly reaches out and grabs her from behind, supporting her in the water.
B: I got you!
Red, still scared, her eyes widen, reacts in panic and tries to get away from Black- Black is confused by Red's reaction
R: No! Don't touch me!
B: What?!
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Page 17
As Red pleads with Black to stay away from her, small water creatures called Sea-Chis stick their heads out of the water to observe the scene. Black is confused by Red's reaction and looks at her, puzzled.
R: Please! Get away!
B: What the fuck! Red, it's me!
Red is still scared, and she pleads with Black not to hurt her
R: Please don't hurt me! I don't want to be hurt!
Black tries to reassure Red that he is not a threat, but his annoyance is showing
B: Hurt you?! I’m here to fucking help you!
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Page 18
Black tries to calm Red down, but his annoyance is still showing
B: Look at me. It's me, Black.
She cautiously turns her head and looks at Black. She starts to recognize him and starts to calm down, she whispers with teary eyes
R: B-Black…
Black continues to hold Red, keeping her safe in the dangerous ocean water. He is still frustrated, but also relieved that she is calming down
B: That's it... just breathe... and relax
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Page 19
Black and Red are still in the ocean. Red is now clinging onto Black, holding him tightly
Black is thinking to himself, confused about Red's behavior
B: (thinks) What's wrong with her? Has she seriously not recognized me?
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Page 20
Black looks up at the towering mountains, frustration clear on his face
B: (thinks) Ugh, this is going to be a tough climb
Black and Red finally reach the top. Black pushing, helping Red up. Grape is waiting for them, looking relieved and screams happily
G: Yay! You guys made it!
G: Thank goodness you're both okay! I thought you were both goners!
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Page 21
Black is beyond frustrated, he turns to Red and starts yelling at her
B: What the Fuck, Red! Sneaking off the spaceship all by yourself on an unknown exoplanet?! Have you lost your fucking mind?!
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Page 22
Red is scared, she can see how angry Black is and she starts to apologize
R: I'm so sorry
Black is not having it, he continues to yell at Red, his annoyance evident
B: Sorry doesn't cut it!
Black points his finger at Red, warning her of the consequences of her actions
B: Mark my words, Red. If you ever pull a stunt like this again, you'll fucking regret it!
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Page 23
Black is walking away, still angry and frustrated with Red. Red hesitates but then decides to speak up
R: I'm truly sorry for what I did.
Red's words catch Black's attention and he stops in his tracks but does not turn around
R: I don't know what would have happened if you weren't there. I can't thank you enough for saving me
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Page 24
Black is still facing forward. Grape is looking from Red to Black, worried about the tension between them
Grape steps in, trying to diffuse the tension between Black and Red
G: Whoa, whoa, whoa! What's with all the negativity?
Grape tries to lighten the mood by teasing Black in a playful manner
G: Black, you're still the same old grumpy boy I used to know and love
Black turns slightly to Grape, growling at him in annoyance.
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Page 25
Grape sees that he's not making things better and decides to make a quick escape. He turns to Red and greets her with a smile
G: Looks like I gave you a little fright there, huh little one?
Red is looking at Grape, confused and still scared
R: W-who are you?
Grape introduces himself to Red, trying to make a good first impression
G: My name's Grape and I come in peace... mostly
Red becomes frightened by Grape's use of the word "mostly"
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Page 26
Grape notices Red's scared look and speaks to her softly and compassionately
G: Look, I deeply apologize for my earlier behavior. I promise to be more gentle in the future and assure you, I mean no harm. I hope you can forgive me…
Red smiles shyly at Grape and forgives him
R: I forgive you. It's nice to meet you, Grape.
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Page 27
Grape gets extremely excited and grabs Red's hand, shaking it with enthusiasm. Red blushes and smiles.
G: I have a good feeling about this friendship, it's going to be grape-tastic! Can't wait to make lots of silly memories and learn all your juicy secrets.
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Page 28
Grape lowers his voice and speaks to Red.
G: And also… I have just learned that you’re the prey of my great ruler
Red looks at Grape, paying close attention.
G: This means that from this moment forward…
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Page 29
Grape bows his head respectfully, catching Red by surprise.
G: I will serve you with the utmost respect and loyalty...
Grape lifts his head slightly and gives Red a warm smile, causing Red to blush and look nervous.
G: My little one
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Page 30
Suddenly, Black interrupts from behind with a sarcastic tone.
B: Oh, I see. So now you're all about serving her, are you?
Grape turns around, feeling flustered as he replies with annoyance.
G: Hey there, Mr. Grumpy! Just because I don't like getting all wet and wild doesn't mean I can't serve with respect and loyalty!
Grape shudders in disgust, Red giggles cutely, clearly amused by Grape's words
G: Water and I aren’t friends. It's like a wet blanket on my grape-y self!
