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The Blood Queen 17

🕑 Added 2024-11-27 00:31:03 +0000 UTC

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Lucas Moreira

Yo WebNovel is up to ch 16 but we only get one extra chapter for Z class? Wasn’t it supposed to be 3 chapters?

Soulkiller84

Ah. That solved the Issum. Maybe it's just me, but when I read multi-part stories or even books, I get a little irked when something like this happens. I understand why it can happen, but in a published book, you can't change retroactively the earlier chapters. In this case it's the perfect solution, especially if it was already the plan for Rowena not to know about Sacred Gears.

Charlie Johnson

Ah, you're right. I changed it in the first chapter. I changed it to “It’s not that you don’t have any magic, otherwise we wouldnt be talking…” Rowena wasn't supposed to know what a Sacred Gear was because they came out after she died. At least they did in this story.

Soulkiller84

I really like this story. I have just a tiny problem with this chapter, which is, that Valerie doesn't know what a sacred gear is. In the first chapter Rowena already mentioned sacred gears. Here is the Quote: “It’s not that you don’t have any magic, all Sacred Gear users are born with it…”. I mean this could be easily explained in a later chapter, as in not being really important at the moment or any other way. I mean it's just a very little thing, but with an explenation later it would make the story, at least for me, better.

james murphy

or can use it for reaise hand instead of raiser get that big tit red head devil lol

Zero1zero1

TFTC! Maybe usr the favour for a proper weapon? Or just ask vamp daddy what he thinks would be best.

Danielle

Hmmmm… more differences, but interesting differences that keep the Christian pantheon more in check than they are in canon. Good. Curious to see what other magic she’ll learn from the dead.


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