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Thunder and Black Wings 2

🕑 Added 2025-01-04 01:00:31 +0000 UTC

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Josh

This looks like its ganna be another great story

Dan_Tan

Ditto to WhatAFungi, love the new idea and would love to see more. But is there any chance you will return to Dimensional Nephilim?

Dark epyon

Nice start looking forward to chapter 3

HugoH

Let’s hope he don’t start using chakra. The guy must already learn how to use : - his fallen angel power, - his mutant power (portal + dimensional energy manipulation) - learning how to fight (Taijutsu) - and maybe how to use his physical energy (touki and senjutsu). … He clearly has too much for him to learn the local system of power on top of everything. He already has the potential to become one of the top powerhouse of his home universe with enough time and effort 👍

WhatAFungi

Very true, Laylas more of a “let your freak flag fly” as long as you don’t hurt anyone

Ofeq 2003

Layla: "you thought it was your multiverse, but it was actually mine! Layla's" Though considering the being above Phenex is probably the one which sealed his powers... It isn't really like Layla to do something like "you have too much anger in your heart, so I am going to need you, rob you of your identity, and throw you into the literal hell that is the American foster child system"

Chase Garcia

You think we'll see Blake in one punch man bang would whip him into shape

Buck Futter

Interesting premise. Where to next?

JoMo

More please!

Andrew Stewart

I like it so far I'm curious if Blake will be able to use chakra as in the naruto world it's something that needs to be unlocked from what I remember. Also how many wings does he have? I'd ask you to genderbend Naruto and Sasuke, but given that Tsundae isn't hokage yet they'd be too young for it to matter unless you age them up or have Blake stay there till Kaguya is defeated which I can't see you doing unless there is a major timeskip cause that'd be like 3-4 yrs he'd spend in naruto

Zero1zero1

You certainly have my attention.

Lictor Magnus

I like it so far. I would definitely read more if you wrote more.

WhatAFungi

I’m intrigued and want to see more. But only if it doesn’t take away from your other stories (other than SUPE devil. Couldn’t get into that one). Is the being above the Phinix-Force a certain gorgeous, supreme-goddess-sama?

The Milf Emperor

Tsunade is best girl but shizune needs some love too, she is grossly under used in most fanfics.

The Milf Emperor

As a little side story would be cool.

Danciingbread

I very much enjoyed this. Please write more of this.

Davis Domingue

Was shaky interested on the first chapter but the segue into Naruto picked it up, I’d like to read more

David Beltran

I can't wait to see more chapter's of this story,thank you very much.

Lupus Umbras

Interesting

Charlie Johnson

No they won't be evil.

Bartosz Waszak

So... some powerful a*hole pulled Dumbledore sh*t on him. In my world pulling this trick is immediate death sentence for him and every other "Greater good" preacher. Overall good beginning. BTW: Marvel crossover does it mean devils will be "evil" like in fallen gamer or canon ?

RiceMan

nice, will he meet america and strange during the MoM movie tahtd be funny


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