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A Systematic Tale: The Hero 17

🕑 Added 2025-05-24 21:58:17 +0000 UTC

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Artemis

You'll be fine once you adjust. It's a dry heat. >_<

Artemis

It'd be hilarious if he gets the "mission accomplished" screen at some point from simply mentioning to the Jedi that Palpatine is a sith.

Kamden Wilson

ok fair good story to but the gungans to me seemed to just be unnecessary to the whole plot

Dark epyon

I’m glad you addressed the lacking of jar jar because as I was reading it I was already foaming at the mouth he wasn’t noticing it and this should make Silas very cautious going forward because this instance right here changes quite a bit about his powers because now he’s not just going to other universes he’s going to other versions of universe In the Skyrim universe, it could be assumed that him and Amy were just added onto the plot here that isn’t the case things have distinctly changed from canon so going forward every new universe he ends up in . He should assume it’s like a book to movie. the universe’s he ends up in is based on a canon, but may not be the same. And I suppose, if theoretically you go back to the previous chapter, the reason why the queen was close to possibly dying is because the Jedi were late they didn’t take the shortcut from the Gungan city they had to get their on foot

WhatAFungi

Fuck yes! No Jar jar! I love this story the most. It has so much potential that I think Fallen Gamer is running out of. I have this picture in my mind of Contessa pushing Alexandria into the harem juice. And then like in a few chapters realizing that the path required her to jump into the harem too. Just the shock on her face until she just shrugs and says “welp, path says to get plowed by dragon dick? Guess I’m getting plowed by dragon dick.” Thank you for the chapter!

Wayce

Lol, "i don't like gungans, how can i remove them? Oh right, genocide. Thats a good idea."

Xi

I wonder if time passes by the same. If that’s the case, Silas can’t afford to let the Clone Wars play out so he’ll need to jumpstart Palpatine’s downfall.

byan marthy

Gonna be intriguing if time jumps when they revisit universes if if only the same time passes.

Sebastian Fur

Thank God there are no gungans... Darth Jar Jar isa deadah

Matthew Smith

Well good thing Jar Jar wasn't really in the books. Think he got like 1 chapter as a side note. He was added as comedic relief in the movies.

Rapthorn2ndform

Yeah Jar jar... the only thing worth a danm about him is the theory that he was originally supposed to be a sitj lord before major rewrites. Other than that... the story can only improve with his absence

Selina

You… you killed them. 😭 poor jar jar he was annoying and possibly evil but he didn’t deserve that.

Buck Futter

Tbf, the gungans without jar jar binks would have been much more tolerable...


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