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(Worm) A Systematic Tale: The Hero 2

🕑 Added 2025-03-23 05:03:04 +0000 UTC

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Rapthorn2ndform

Legit said "finally awake." When he woke up in hospital last chapter. The skyrim opening is so firmly drilled into my mind.

Corey McWhirter

"Lady Photon gave her daughter an approving smile. "Good job, Vicky."" You called Lady Photon Victoria's mother. Her actual mother is Brandish.

Buck Futter

Love it, more please!

Alexis Chalifour

I Will follow you fanfic with great interest.

WhatAFungi

I don’t recommend the original. You just need to read some of the better fanfics. I recommend “mutant divinations” that one should cover enough of the original plot to get by

WhatAFungi

Then that guard will spread the word and it will become a line of all the guards wanting the get healing from Amy. Amy will be back to square one, and all of Skyrim will be left guard less.

WhatAFungi

How else will we have unreasonably extreme responses to slights. Or vastly AU Taylor’s? I mean… All hail the Queen! I meant no slight

dark helmet9

Should be interesting can't wait to see where you go with this. When i saw the skyrim part all i could think of was this scene Random guard walks up "I used to be an adventurer like you, before ..." Amy " Shut up!" Touches guard "there go back to adventuring and leave us alone."

NoRest

I love Worm fanfic, so I'm gonna read it.

Travis Burgin

Skyrim huh, well if Aludin =47% what will the next game do

Shard

I'm not a fan of everyone seeing his popups. It seems like a major liability but I'm still enjoying it so far, plus it's good to have a worm story that doesn't focus on Taylor for a change.

Josh

Ive never read Worm but this is great.

Rycork

Panacea: Before I was a great healer and then I was teleported to another dimension

RackOfLife

Seems cool the story has potential

p0tat0

Good start tho I guess secure the healer, smart, move and great story so far thanks.

p0tat0

So um is is the story over if he dies to a dragon because as of now he just seems so meh

Blake

Oh god, how's armsmaster gonna fuck this one up?

WhatAFungi

I’m loving this! I love worm and this isn’t too AU but also just AU enough so far. One criticism, you made Vicky a little to stupid in my opinion. She’s smarter than “bimbo who gets distracted by hot guy” so unless our lead has a “I’m a hot guy look at me” master field (like Vicky’s aura) I think you should have toned that down. I guess it could all be an act, but I feel like she should be more worried for her sister. Going from Mauling Snarks to this will be really weird. lol. Also, is anyone else loving AC: Shadow? Thanks for the chapter! I can’t wait for more! Here’s hoping that this fic survives the fic-killer XD


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